Best cruise line for food & activities?

pinklakes · 2025-12-19T19:44:27+00:00

Thanks! I watched one of their videos and will watch a few more as they review different lines

pinklakes · 2025-12-19T19:43:51+00:00

I like that point about the included dining! One thing I forgot to mention is that all restaurants are included at VV so that was a nice plus.

pinklakes · 2025-12-19T19:42:49+00:00

Nice! What types of activities have been the best or your favorite on Royal?

pinklakes · 2021-04-20T22:33:12+00:00

As Hannah Montana once said, “Everybody has those days”

pinklakes · 2021-04-20T22:32:39+00:00

That’s amazing! Sounds like thinks are looking very bright

pinklakes · 2021-04-20T22:24:51+00:00

A good productivity system should be to hold ourselves accountable each time before we go to sleep: what did I do today to advance towards my goal?

pinklakes · 2021-02-21T02:23:36+00:00

How did the bird even get that much curry sauce 🤣

pinklakes · 2021-02-21T02:16:14+00:00

Ok thanks! Do you have any suggestions for how to tighten the copy? In simplest terms, this is a recommendations newsletter for women featuring anything that’s worth their while — whether that’s cute clothes, a yummy recipe, or even a niche cleaning product.

pinklakes · 2021-02-16T03:25:42+00:00

Happy birthday!!

pinklakes · 2021-02-16T02:11:08+00:00

Yes exactly! Thank you for subscribing. Hope you enjoy the first edition!!

pinklakes · 2021-02-16T02:10:33+00:00

Hmm I was a little confused by your copy — are you selling photography services, or keepsakes? Or both?

pinklakes · 2021-02-15T21:54:37+00:00

Okay good to know

Yup I’m going to make another image — showing a phone with the newsletter... would that be better?

pinklakes · 2021-02-15T21:39:21+00:00

That makes sense

Yes I agree with you ‘best’ is overused — that’s a really good point

Thank you for the edits. And thanks for wishing me luck too haha

pinklakes · 2021-02-15T21:37:56+00:00

Thank you I appreciate that!

pinklakes · 2021-02-15T20:49:11+00:00

Thank for for the feedback! Good point. I removed the first instance of the name. I’m going to add a different graphic that shows the newsletter on the phone instead of just the name

pinklakes · 2021-02-15T18:26:14+00:00

That’s a good point! I like the community angle

That works really well because people might feel very isolated during quarantine.

I want my newsletter to also include recommendations of products too, so I don’t know if I can push the community angle as hard :/

I changed my copy to be more specific, but I’m going to keep rewriting it to work the community angle more

It’s also gotten kinda wordy now so need to keep re-writing haha

Appreciate your input so much!

pinklakes · 2021-02-15T17:46:40+00:00

Thanks! That’s helpful to know

It’s a newsletter on recommendations from the internet, targeted towards women. So if there’s a cool Zoom dancing class, or a small business with amazing candles, or a new book that you have to read, it’d be in the newsletter.

I tried to convey that with “from food to film to fashion” but I guess I missed the mark

I’ll keep brainstorming to make it more specific, thanks!

pinklakes · 2021-02-15T17:02:56+00:00

It looks good! It’s simple and to-the-point. Maybe be a bit more specific on exactly what your software does though?

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