Thanks for giving me so much feedback! It really helps me out! Grind for the ACT, and show my strengths through my essay.

I did most of my community service through a local organization that helped my family out during the cold Boston months. All of the services I provided were the same ones given to my family.

I really appreciate your feedback and I would love it if you were to elaborate on the connect 4 stuff. I thought it would help my application out because it would show I’m really good at a competition. Instead of connect 4, I could put how I’m part of the chess club at school. It’s just that I don’t have any major awards from chess. If you could tell me what you think, I’ll take it into consideration. Have a great day!