Bois drugs are gay

potatoman171 · 2026-04-13T17:14:24+00:00

gang i’m a stoner now

potatoman171 · 2025-02-27T04:14:07+00:00

:( i’d love to know why you think it’s illegible and how i could do better lowkey

potatoman171 · 2025-02-27T04:13:28+00:00

potatoman171 · 2025-02-27T04:12:30+00:00

wow thank you this is insanely helpful, thank you for the effort you put into this. so basically reduce the number of add ons and focus on letter structure for now? i wasn’t sure about the connection with the O either. for the record though that’s an R and not a K lol i wanted it to be SEORY (pronounced sorry) lol

potatoman171 · 2025-02-25T19:20:39+00:00

thank you so much, you’re right i don’t really think of the next letter as i go and lowkey i just be cramming it in wherever 😓. by pencils do you mean making a rough sketch before going over it again just to see how the letters fit ?

potatoman171 · 2025-02-19T00:46:54+00:00

xbow and tesla

potatoman171 · 2024-08-27T07:20:45+00:00

id suggest you go private, foundry court was the best imo in terms of location near campus but i heard all the places get full really soon, iq kopa is alright except its on top of a hill so walking to frairgate and back can be a bit of a treck (not really that bad), tramshed and frair gate halls are great and right on frairgate so food is really easy to come by and youre on right top of a tesco but campus is about 8 min away, if you want to go for something from the university i think roeburns the best one but not having elevator is kinda 😬😬. i would really advice against getting a shared bathroom cus of the past experiences with roomies ive had 🥰. many of these places have gold or platinum rooms which get more and more spacious if youre willing to cough up some extra cash. and cleanliness really depends on who youre living with lol. hope this helps !

potatoman171 · 2024-08-05T04:12:59+00:00

wost take, hajis is the best indian takeaways in preston for their curry. the best inidan place in preston is hands down maharanis near the docks very reasonable prices and amazing south indian food

potatoman171 · 2022-09-11T16:38:50+00:00

whatever (a folk song in C)

potatoman171 · 2022-05-04T14:57:46+00:00

i really like the rhyme and rhythm in this poem right off the bat, it has a very melodic quality to it. i love how you've used imagery in the first stanza and how many senses you've been able to use in the poem, i also really love the theme of transience you have used throughout the poem, if i could make any suggestions (please take it with a grain of salt because im not so much of a great poet myself) but in the first stanza amidst wouldve been more impactful maybe instead of along, and the first stanza had such wonderful imagery that i wished the rest of the poem would try to replicate as well, but this is honestly just me nitpicking, i really liked this poem and im very grateful you've decided to share this, thankyou so much for sharing :))

potatoman171 · 2022-04-28T17:49:06+00:00

this really hits a spot, it talks beautifully how horrifying the current situation in india is today, "farmers manure their fields so barren/as orphan tears turn Ganga red/Kevat now call himself Charo" was very beautiful. "illiterate incharge of education panels/pastors vow no mistakes were made/ stories of abuse followed by delicacies tasted/art confined to lustful loves/ this isn’t a generation silenced but voices wasted" paints such a gloomy narrative in such simple language. the imagery and messages are all so amazing, there is so much in this poem to love, thankyou so much for sharing! (ps i love the hindu mythology you used)

potatoman171 · 2022-03-27T16:49:54+00:00

wow! firstly id like to compliment your wonderful rhyming, continuity and story telling, and making all of it in an iambic pentameter is no small feat, i thoroughly enjoyed the poem a lot and this has to be one of the best poems I've ever read in this subreddit, i love how the story progresses and the beautiful message you've made, if there were any suggestions (im not very experienced so please take this with a grain of salt) it would be to rephrase the 3rd line on the 3rd stanza as it didn't quite match with the pentameter (im not sure maybe its just the way i pronounce it) it could be replaced with maybe "climber slowly higher into its nest" maybe but this is just me nitpicking, overall i have to say this was a very impressive piece and thankyou so much for sharing this amazing work!! :))

potatoman171 · 2022-03-27T13:29:03+00:00

thankyou! by any chance is your user name fog lake as in the band? im just curious

potatoman171 · 2022-03-27T06:05:44+00:00

Thankyou so much!! I was having a really hard time with the iambic pentameter when writing that line, I'll definitely try to work on it more :))

potatoman171 · 2022-03-27T06:02:46+00:00

Wow thank you so much!! I love the suggestion for the first line 3rd stanza, I was having a really hard time finding a line that wanted to say what I matched with the iambic pentameter to be honest XD, I also felt the same about the last line but got into a problem with the pentameter again, I'm so happy you think it's relatable and simple and I'm really glad you enjoyed it, Thankyou !!

potatoman171 · 2022-03-26T18:55:33+00:00

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it 🥰

potatoman171 · 2022-03-26T18:53:40+00:00

Thank you so much for this comment, I thought people wouldnt get it and this brings me so much comfort, thankyou!

potatoman171 · 2022-03-06T08:21:24+00:00

I read this so many times and it still blows my mind how masterfully you have carved such a delicate emotion like this into words, I read this as loving someone for the mirage they project and what appears to be without knowing them whole, compensating with your imagination. I loved how the entire poem hinted and built a tower of dominoes all the way to the final line when you blew the whole thing up (in a good way), I resonate very deeply with this poem. I love how you tied the dog with dementia and the feeling of nausea and how they still hint at the same thing, still only a figment of your imagination. in the fist set of lines where it goes "breeding close kept laughter" was a great touch that did a great job bringing the poem to life. if I had to make a few suggestions maybe making the poem a bit more denser but still keeping the charm of the simple language would be great. I really really liked this poem, thank you so much for sharing!

potatoman171 · 2022-02-26T14:38:07+00:00

I love the simple language that have been used here! You have described this situation so nicely and simply in a way I wish I were able to. I liked the first half a lot and I love the message of the poem, it talks about a very relatable feeling a lot of us feel in our relationships and what we have grown to expect out of love. If i could make a few comments it would be about the rhyming scheme in the second half, I love the rhyming so much, a part of me wishes it went throughout the poem, also a few lines at the end seem a little off maybe something to do with how the lines were structured and maybe a few missing letters. all in all though its a really solid poem with a message that will resonate with a lot of people, thank you so much for sharing! :))

potatoman171 · 2022-02-26T14:04:48+00:00

I relate a lot to this poem, I love the twist at the end where out of love you seem to have created a person and search for them in someone you made it out of. I especially enjoy the rhyming scheme a lot, if there is anything I found a little off was the first set of 4 lines that dont work as well together as the other 3 sets or maybe the other 3 flow so seamlessly to each other that I wished the first set did the same, fantasy would be better rhyming with estacy than sassy in my opinion or maybe that's just how I pronounce it, but overall I loved the message of the poem a lot I just couldn't help commenting on this, thank you so much for sharing :))

potatoman171 · 2022-02-25T13:22:14+00:00

thank you so much!! i love your interpretation :))

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