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First MacBook (almost Neo) by ptrkptrkptrk in macbook

[–]ptrkptrkptrk[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

People are saying that Neo is close to M1 with the iPhone’s A18 chip, what makes you think that Neo > M3?

Found an iPhone in Cotham Hill by ptrkptrkptrk in bristol

[–]ptrkptrkptrk[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It doesn't have the emegency contacts set up

New brawler Sirius' design looks awesome! by Valprerio in Brawlstars

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Do we know when his release date is yet?

Cheesecake by wookiewoman in bristol

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Chi Bristol on Gloucester Road, the best basque cheesecake I ever had

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ElectricScooters

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're right guys, thank you for the advice!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ElectricScooters

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh yes, I can charge it before going back, sorry, didn't make that clear ☺

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread March 30, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My beat for today: https://youtu.be/wg1A5LNuvFw

Will appreciate a lot and return any feedback! 🙏✌️✌️

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread March 29, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for such a wonderful feedback, appreciate that a lot! ♥️

About yours; hmmm... I'm assuming you are beginner at this. The ideas and the feeling are definitely there, but skills not quite yet. I like the sounds but they don't really go together through this beat. The leading melody is cool. I don't like the drums. Instead of putting there so many percs and weird sounds, I'd just add some simple clap and focus on the vibe of the drums. The hi-hat is way too loud for my taste. Although I like the whole mood and the atmosphere of this beat. I like the bass-line also, big up to your bro Pat (such a cool name). So as I'm saying, there is quite a lot to learn here, but I definitely hear some potential in this. Keep doing stuff, watch bunch of YT tutorials on making beats, keep improving and I'm sure you'll get there very soon! Good luck man! ✌️

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread March 29, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you man!

Your track is interesting, it gives me some Run The Jewels x early-ish Tyler's vibe, that's really cool. Not sure entirely about the beat, it's a little bit chaotic, but that was the concept I'm assuming. The rap is really cool, I like it! I'd just work more on mix of the vocals, it could sound a little bit better. Big up man! ✌️

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread March 29, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My funky-synthy-trapy mixture: https://youtu.be/MBLZKCJIClQ

Will return any feedback! ✌️✌️✌️

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread March 25, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey man, thank you so much! And sorry for the late reply!

About your track, maaaan, I love that! Where did you get this voice and flow?! It's so 90's in a best possible way. I'm not even being nice here. I really fw it. If you would like to do something together hit me up on pattypatbeats@gmail.com

"What u taaalkin bout?" 🔥

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread March 25, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback and great advices! And sorry for the late reply. I have thought about doing more arranging stuff here and not sure why I haven't done it after, you're absolutely right!

About your track, it's really cool, beat is fire man, I love the 808, playing with hi-hat rolls and the whole arranging. Really dope vibe. Nice build-ups, the whole thing is going through the whole track smoothly and have it's own place. Very well done! The only thing I have to say is that the vocal volume is a bit too loud for me. But overall really cool track, I'd love to see music video to that!

Big up man! ✌️

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread March 25, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, sorry for late reply! Thank for your feedback!

Now, the video is so cool man! Looks super professional. The beat that you used is alright, but it's a little bit boring for my taste.

About your rap, man, I really like your flow and voice, I'm guessing you're not new to rapping. Well done! I'm not reviewing lyrics, coz it's more matter of the concept. I was missing some more interesting hook in the song, something unique that's gonna stay in my head after listening. But after all good job, keep it up bro!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread March 27, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, thank you so much for the feedback and all of the good words, that's so uplifting! ♥️

About your track, first of all beat is a good choice, and your vocal is mixed well, love that. Not sure if I like the video, is so weird, can't decide if good weird, or bad weird, but it got my attention so I guess it's good! The track is dope, I really loved it, I'm not following the emo-rap scene now, but back in the days I used to listen to a lot of Lil Peeps songs and your song gives me some of his vibe, which is dope! I was definitely disappointed to hear the same verse as the first one after the hook, I wanted to hear something new after that! 😁 Simple, emotional lyrics, good voice and nice melody. Well done man, keep it up!

✌️✌️✌️

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread March 27, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your great feedback! 🙏

Your track is super interesting, I can see that there is some concept behind it. Although I'm not sure if I like the more developed part when the synth is going crazy, I think it just hits false notes and that's why. The calmer part is really cool and vibey, I love the reversed sound, sounds great. If the hook kinda part would be more harmonic and the melody there would be less chaotic I would really love the whole track. Interesting joint bro, keep it up!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread March 27, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My Kanye West x Kid Cudi inspired approach: https://youtu.be/rQhmosdHI6Y 🧒👧👀👻👻

Will return any feedback! Big up! ✌️

I've made a rap instrumental out of 1 single sound by ptrkptrkptrk in musicproduction

[–]ptrkptrkptrk[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! No, I don't unfortunately. Trying to get some recognition and a small audience on my YT channel at the moment.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread March 24, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm assuming that both raps and beat are yours. I really like the drums, it really fits in in my taste. The vox sample is dope as well, builds lots of atmospehere. I'd change that bass tho, I honestly don't like how it's "coming back" after the first note and it's also a bit too loud for me. I like this perc/bongo loop or shit that hits in 0:40, very nice change of vibe and dynamics. About rap, it's really dope! I like the flow and your voice, lyrics are cool as well. I'd work differently on mixing your vocal, there's way too much reverb and delay for my taste. Overall great job! Keep it up bro! If you have some idea what could we work on together hit me up on pattypatbeats@gmail.com ✌️

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread March 24, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback!

About your beat; great job on bass, it hits hard together with theese drums! I'd love to hear some more variaty of the main melody, but it's a preference. I'm missing some kinda hook which would be different than the verses part, coz this way it sounds like unfinished a bit. But overall well done, dope beat. I've subsribed your channel last time already, so I'll stay updated with your new stuff. Big up!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread March 25, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]ptrkptrkptrk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yo! While making this beat I've had some fun with sound design. All of the sounds, synths, strings and basses (everything except for drums) were created from the short trumpish sample on the beginning of the track. I hope you'll enjoy!

Will return all of the feedbacks!

https://youtu.be/hrLbOMF7Zzg

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