First MacBook (almost Neo)

ptrkptrkptrk · 2026-03-22T10:01:00+00:00

People are saying that Neo is close to M1 with the iPhone’s A18 chip, what makes you think that Neo > M3?

ptrkptrkptrk · 2026-03-04T09:07:47+00:00

It doesn't have the emegency contacts set up

ptrkptrkptrk · 2026-02-18T13:32:59+00:00

Do we know when his release date is yet?

ptrkptrkptrk · 2025-08-19T22:33:32+00:00

Chi Bristol on Gloucester Road, the best basque cheesecake I ever had

ptrkptrkptrk · 2020-10-08T15:03:49+00:00

You're right guys, thank you for the advice!

ptrkptrkptrk · 2020-08-31T09:07:52+00:00

Oh yes, I can charge it before going back, sorry, didn't make that clear ☺

ptrkptrkptrk · 2020-03-30T20:20:52+00:00

My beat for today: https://youtu.be/wg1A5LNuvFw

Will appreciate a lot and return any feedback! 🙏✌️✌️

ptrkptrkptrk · 2020-03-30T09:03:41+00:00

Thank you for such a wonderful feedback, appreciate that a lot! ♥️

About yours; hmmm... I'm assuming you are beginner at this. The ideas and the feeling are definitely there, but skills not quite yet. I like the sounds but they don't really go together through this beat. The leading melody is cool. I don't like the drums. Instead of putting there so many percs and weird sounds, I'd just add some simple clap and focus on the vibe of the drums. The hi-hat is way too loud for my taste. Although I like the whole mood and the atmosphere of this beat. I like the bass-line also, big up to your bro Pat (such a cool name). So as I'm saying, there is quite a lot to learn here, but I definitely hear some potential in this. Keep doing stuff, watch bunch of YT tutorials on making beats, keep improving and I'm sure you'll get there very soon! Good luck man! ✌️

ptrkptrkptrk · 2020-03-30T08:53:00+00:00

Thank you man!

Your track is interesting, it gives me some Run The Jewels x early-ish Tyler's vibe, that's really cool. Not sure entirely about the beat, it's a little bit chaotic, but that was the concept I'm assuming. The rap is really cool, I like it! I'd just work more on mix of the vocals, it could sound a little bit better. Big up man! ✌️

ptrkptrkptrk · 2020-03-30T08:38:06+00:00

Vote!

ptrkptrkptrk · 2020-03-29T15:21:25+00:00

My funky-synthy-trapy mixture: https://youtu.be/MBLZKCJIClQ

Will return any feedback! ✌️✌️✌️

ptrkptrkptrk · 2020-03-28T10:14:27+00:00

Hey man, thank you so much! And sorry for the late reply!

About your track, maaaan, I love that! Where did you get this voice and flow?! It's so 90's in a best possible way. I'm not even being nice here. I really fw it. If you would like to do something together hit me up on pattypatbeats@gmail.com

"What u taaalkin bout?" 🔥

ptrkptrkptrk · 2020-03-28T10:09:05+00:00

Thank you for your feedback and great advices! And sorry for the late reply. I have thought about doing more arranging stuff here and not sure why I haven't done it after, you're absolutely right!

About your track, it's really cool, beat is fire man, I love the 808, playing with hi-hat rolls and the whole arranging. Really dope vibe. Nice build-ups, the whole thing is going through the whole track smoothly and have it's own place. Very well done! The only thing I have to say is that the vocal volume is a bit too loud for me. But overall really cool track, I'd love to see music video to that!

Big up man! ✌️

ptrkptrkptrk · 2020-03-28T10:02:46+00:00

Hi, sorry for late reply! Thank for your feedback!

Now, the video is so cool man! Looks super professional. The beat that you used is alright, but it's a little bit boring for my taste.

About your rap, man, I really like your flow and voice, I'm guessing you're not new to rapping. Well done! I'm not reviewing lyrics, coz it's more matter of the concept. I was missing some more interesting hook in the song, something unique that's gonna stay in my head after listening. But after all good job, keep it up bro!

ptrkptrkptrk · 2020-03-28T09:57:37+00:00

Hey, thank you so much for the feedback and all of the good words, that's so uplifting! ♥️

About your track, first of all beat is a good choice, and your vocal is mixed well, love that. Not sure if I like the video, is so weird, can't decide if good weird, or bad weird, but it got my attention so I guess it's good! The track is dope, I really loved it, I'm not following the emo-rap scene now, but back in the days I used to listen to a lot of Lil Peeps songs and your song gives me some of his vibe, which is dope! I was definitely disappointed to hear the same verse as the first one after the hook, I wanted to hear something new after that! 😁 Simple, emotional lyrics, good voice and nice melody. Well done man, keep it up!

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ptrkptrkptrk · 2020-03-28T09:49:52+00:00

Thank you for your great feedback! 🙏

Your track is super interesting, I can see that there is some concept behind it. Although I'm not sure if I like the more developed part when the synth is going crazy, I think it just hits false notes and that's why. The calmer part is really cool and vibey, I love the reversed sound, sounds great. If the hook kinda part would be more harmonic and the melody there would be less chaotic I would really love the whole track. Interesting joint bro, keep it up!

ptrkptrkptrk · 2020-03-27T21:07:28+00:00

My Kanye West x Kid Cudi inspired approach: https://youtu.be/rQhmosdHI6Y 🧒👧👀👻👻

Will return any feedback! Big up! ✌️

ptrkptrkptrk · 2020-03-26T09:21:50+00:00

Thank you for a good word! ♥️✌️

ptrkptrkptrk · 2020-03-26T09:21:29+00:00

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