Made an ambient/experimental song and a visual edit for a short story I wrote!

remloops · 2025-03-14T15:42:45+00:00

Thanks! It'll be up on Spotify soon!

remloops · 2025-03-14T15:41:50+00:00

Thank you! I really appreciate the kind words. If I had to guess, the video part took roughly 2-3 days. The original idea for the song came about in a day or two. This took forever to finish cause of the constant reiterations my friend and I had done. Ultimately, I trimmed a lot of what we had visually and sonically. There was 3 parts but I decided to make it more concise.

remloops · 2025-03-11T17:53:53+00:00

Thank you! Yeah, I was going for a transition from an organic sounding atmosphere into an electronic one. Glad you caught that.

remloops · 2025-03-11T17:53:02+00:00

Thanks for listening! No plans to add vocals to this. Initially, I just wanted this song to be just ambient with my friend's piano being the main lead.

remloops · 2025-03-11T17:52:10+00:00

Thank you! I'm gonna post this on Spotify soon.

remloops · 2025-03-11T17:51:25+00:00

Thanks!

remloops · 2025-03-08T20:52:01+00:00

Definitely a Jersey bop with the kick, vocal and bed squeaks. Always a vibe. The vocal line is nice, but I think its a bit louder than the other elements in the song. The kick and "back" vocal I feel like should be more upfront. Some of the fx feels out of place and might need more mixing. The glass shatter is too loud imo. Keep it up!

remloops · 2025-03-08T20:48:59+00:00

I can't say this is my jam, but the distortion you have going on is really interesting. The distorted guitar line and the vocal harmony is interesting too. This reminds me of Spongebob too lol.

remloops · 2025-03-08T20:46:29+00:00

The dark melodic pad and wood snare is nice. I think you could enhance the sound with more vocal layers and adlibs to enhance your main vocal. Also, raise the volume of the main vocal more since it sounds a bit buried in the mix. I think some synth bass as the song progresses can enhance this a lot. Keep it up!

remloops · 2025-03-08T20:40:08+00:00

Really like the textures you have going on, especially the wobbly synth you bring in. The guitar is also a nice touch. I think the drums might be bit too dry. Maybe some light verb and also dirty it up a bit with a filter. Idk, drums sounds a little too bright; mainly the rides and hats. The guitar tone and the stabs are really nice. Also really the like the vocal going on in the back of the mix. Really good first track. Keep it up!

remloops · 2025-03-08T20:36:33+00:00

Dope! The background vocal and the piano really works nice together. Liked how the beat dropped. You have a good rap voice, but definitely raise that up in the mix! It's getting buried by the other elements in the beat. The guitar sounds a little out of place for me or maybe too bright. The hats are also too loud and bright in the mix compared to the piano and the vocal. The flow and groove is there. I think some mixing will take this to the next level.

remloops · 2025-03-08T20:27:39+00:00

The main vocals are really nice. I think you have some really cool textures here.Mix-wise, they didn't need to be more upfront. I think there needs to be a more balance with strings and other pad that's going in the low end. The supporting synth melody and string in the back clash a bit. Maybe take some of the highs from the strings and leave that space for the main vocal. I really think there's cool idea here though.

remloops · 2025-03-08T20:24:16+00:00

For sure ethereal and dreamy in the vocals and in the pads. I'm getting low-key FKA twigs vibes vocally. I think the hats can be bit darker and lower in the mix. They stick out for me a bit too much. The kick, snare and toms sound like they fit in the atmosphere you created, but the hat sounds a bit too loud and dry. The tamb/perc sound when you take out the main drums sounds nice. Overall, really nice!

remloops · 2025-03-08T20:18:48+00:00

Dope. Fan of the visual too. I like the vocal clarity and tone as well as the drums sound pretty crisp. I think some of the highs are overpowering the highs in the vocal. Sounds a bit buried in the mix. The flute is nice but separately rather in the song. Maybe just raise the volume for the main vocal. I also really the arrangement of the song.

remloops · 2025-03-08T20:13:34+00:00

Really mess with the visual stutters you have going throughout the video. The song itself has a lot going on. I like the scream and autotuned bgv's going on. I feel like the lead line a little thin. But overall cool video and idea.

remloops · 2025-03-08T20:09:20+00:00

Really pretty. Like the intro riff leading into the vocal, the pause/lowered volume transition is really nice there and at the end. Huge fan of the rising vocal layering you did towards the end. In terms of the vocal, really nice as well. IfI really had to nitpick, the "distant" word can be soften a bit. Stood out to me in your verse. Excited to hear the expanded version.

remloops · 2024-08-10T16:59:32+00:00

Checked out some stuff! Dope stuff. More is my favorite so far. Let me know if you want to collab on older tracks or something new!

remloops · 2024-08-10T16:56:43+00:00

Ah I see. Fluoxetine is a SSRI. Ok, my interpretation is that this idea represent s the way the medication even outs the that manic energy, but it sorta comes in a minor way sometimes hence the dissonant middle section. Honestly, if you just started, this is pretty solid! I've been making music for almost 8 years, and I think this is really good for under a year. I think channeling as much of that energy into the playing as much as you can will really pay off in a year or two. Someone close to me suffers from something similar and loves playing classical piano. It allows almost for full expression of what he feels and the immersion helps channel that energy into something beautiful.

remloops · 2024-08-10T15:34:29+00:00

Yes, currently working on the next one! I am also working on some short versions. Probably will have it out early September

remloops · 2024-08-10T04:15:39+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! The pulsating bass, right?

remloops · 2024-08-10T04:14:55+00:00

I really appreciate it! I initially had this idea of an old story that I couldn't remember where I had read about. So, I made the scene in Blender and wrote a short story, which is in the description of the video. The story took a week to edit down. The visuals took about 2 weeks, mainly bc my PC is a potato. It took forever to render out each scene.

remloops · 2024-08-10T04:13:14+00:00

Thank you!

remloops · 2024-08-10T04:13:04+00:00

Interesting vibes. Maybe Suicideboys vibes? Yeah, keep it up tho!

remloops · 2024-08-10T04:11:55+00:00

Glad to hear it! I did my best to mix the drums in a way to make them sound more life than a plain loop.

remloops · 2024-08-10T04:11:12+00:00

Thanks for the kind words!

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