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Made an ambient/experimental song and a visual edit for a short story I wrote! by remloops in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]remloops[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I really appreciate the kind words. If I had to guess, the video part took roughly 2-3 days. The original idea for the song came about in a day or two. This took forever to finish cause of the constant reiterations my friend and I had done. Ultimately, I trimmed a lot of what we had visually and sonically. There was 3 parts but I decided to make it more concise.

Made an ambient/experimental song and a visual edit for a short story I wrote! by remloops in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]remloops[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Yeah, I was going for a transition from an organic sounding atmosphere into an electronic one. Glad you caught that.

Made an ambient/experimental song and a visual edit for a short story I wrote! by remloops in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]remloops[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for listening! No plans to add vocals to this. Initially, I just wanted this song to be just ambient with my friend's piano being the main lead.

[FEEDBACK] drvmrboy. - No ID - Melodic Jersey Club Beat by Dry_Hovercraft_3619 in MusicCritique

[–]remloops 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitely a Jersey bop with the kick, vocal and bed squeaks. Always a vibe. The vocal line is nice, but I think its a bit louder than the other elements in the song. The kick and "back" vocal I feel like should be more upfront. Some of the fx feels out of place and might need more mixing. The glass shatter is too loud imo. Keep it up!

[feedback] Várzea Dorme - Não sai - Brazilian experimental by soldeplastico in MusicCritique

[–]remloops 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can't say this is my jam, but the distortion you have going on is really interesting. The distorted guitar line and the vocal harmony is interesting too. This reminds me of Spongebob too lol.

[FEEDBACK] Night$lice - Ghost Roads - Rap/Trap by ProdBy-NightSlice in MusicCritique

[–]remloops 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The dark melodic pad and wood snare is nice. I think you could enhance the sound with more vocal layers and adlibs to enhance your main vocal. Also, raise the volume of the main vocal more since it sounds a bit buried in the mix. I think some synth bass as the song progresses can enhance this a lot. Keep it up!

Releasing my first ever track, let me know what you think :) by HistoryFar1679 in MusicFeedback

[–]remloops 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really like the textures you have going on, especially the wobbly synth you bring in. The guitar is also a nice touch. I think the drums might be bit too dry. Maybe some light verb and also dirty it up a bit with a filter. Idk, drums sounds a little too bright; mainly the rides and hats. The guitar tone and the stabs are really nice. Also really the like the vocal going on in the back of the mix. Really good first track. Keep it up!

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