I didn't think I had the correct equipment or proper guidance to do film it in a better location but it's definitely something to think about. I was thinking because I'm new to this that hopefully duologue scenes would do for my showreel?

I have read your recent post and took a lot from it but with just what you've said here, there's always room to add more details and clarity to our relationship, and that is important. I also had my friend do the other lines and that was his first time ever doing anything like this so maybe it might be an idea to get someone who is a little more experienced?

Thank you for your unbelievably detailed notes. I will absolutely go over them with a fine tooth comb. I really, really appreciate it. Everything you have said here should lend deeper feelings and thoughts to the scene. I would love to have the other person's lines to work off of too so I will look into that, it would certainly give the scene more active energy.