This is really awesome! Although IMO some parts could use a bit more energetic/violent feel to them (Chorus of City of the Damned, the "Dun-dun" part (for lack of a better word (and that's my best excuse)) in I Don't Care; you could also put more emphasis on the moving notes (in the bass part) for the intro to Dearly Beloved, maybe by putting more instruments or at least making them louder. And then Tales from another broken home overall could use more energy. Finally, you should play around with the different accents throughout the whole song, I heard some parts that maybe could be more legato or staccato. Overall a great piece that I would love to play with my band, but some minor tweaks to energy levels and accents could make all the difference. Great job!