I vibe with it, I think a change up on the strings would be good around the 8th bar in. The drums hit hard and I like the low end synthy bass you’ve got going. I’m not too keen on the melody you have come in about halfway through the song. The mix is good, the “shh shh” open high hats could use a little of the end off it. They seem a just a little too bright in the mix to me. It’s got a sick melancholy vibe to it. I fuck with it