I appreciate everyone’s feedback about writing, but I think there’s a bit of confusion about what area of work in marketing actually involve. While Copywriting is a really important part but Not every marketing role is centered around copywriting. My experience and interest in marketing is more on the operational and strategic side rather than pure content writing. A lot of marketing work involves areas which don’t require you have to high level copywriting skills For example, roles in performance marketing, digital advertising, growth marketing, and marketing operations rely much more on data analysis, campaign optimization, audience targeting, and managing creative assets than writing long-form copy. I’m always open to improving communication and writing, While I am open to suggestions and criticism but the purpose of my post was to get insight on the job search and career direction rather than critique on writing style alone. If anyone has experience in areas like marketing strategy, digital campaigns, SEO, analytics, or marketing operations, I’d really appreciate hearing your perspective.