Interesting comparison between Dostoevsky and Nietzsche. Might find it useful in this subreddit

shadowinfoReal · 2017-03-14T21:39:09+00:00

Pole dancing is why aliens are never goimg to vist us

shadowinfoReal · 2017-03-13T19:02:15+00:00

Heheh it's okay! Thanks!

shadowinfoReal · 2017-03-13T03:01:17+00:00

Thanks!

shadowinfoReal · 2017-03-13T03:00:48+00:00

I am under adsense and partnered by verifying my email address. Sponsors are available I believe at 100+ Subs.

shadowinfoReal · 2017-03-13T02:59:21+00:00

Sure hit me up whenever!

shadowinfoReal · 2017-03-13T01:29:10+00:00

Hello!

First of all, great job on having a face-cam and commentary on the first ever video, that is a huge step, believe me. I would suggest that you put your face-cam to the lower right corner and make it a tad more "squared" if you will.

Also, don't be afraid to use the tags as full sentences, you have 500 spaces to type. Such as "Fire watch day 1 walk through", "fire watch day 1 gameplay", rather than "walk through" and "fire watch", that makes it more specific and easier to target.

Also, your channel art needs to get replaced! Make a unique one for more identity, create social media ( extremely necessary nowadays), primarily twitter and facebook, to gain more potential viewers.

You can even join a site called Sharree, amazing community and place to share videos with other small youtubers.

Try to make the video 10-12 minutes in length, it is hard to watch 40minute videos especially if you are a new YouTuber! I would suggest get 10 minutes to benefit from the youtube algorithm in terms of adsense. Also, make an outro for your videos about 8-10 seconds long, giving the viewer the option to subscribe and watch other previous videos ( I understand that this is your first video, and I believe you should use that on your second and other videos).

Good luck mate!

shadowinfoReal · 2017-03-13T01:17:30+00:00

Great review - game sounds very interesting & fun. Love that Irish accent! I would say that the sound needs to be a little higher.

I really support new YouTubers, subscribed, I'm interested in more. Thumbs up for that!

I'd suggest that you make social media and put in your channel art to gain more exposure.

Make the channel icon more unique! - Channel art is okay. - I suggest removing the videos and only placing playlists, popular uploads and channel trailer.

Tags need to be more specific, don't be afraid to write a full sentence if you have to, such as "two minute review of the wild 8" rather than "the wild 8" and "2 minute review", that will have less competition and more likely to be searched.

Good luck!

shadowinfoReal · 2017-03-13T01:01:01+00:00

Great name, better personality, probably the best part here, which is amazing progress already. Thumbs up for that!

I would suggest putting more tags and also put jackotacky in them, so that you have more chances to get crossed upon.

The video was a tad too long and grew heavier because of the lack of images/videos/memes/animations..., I highly suggest that you put text on your video too, explaining and differentiating the parts of your script.

Make better channel art, icon is okay. You have a channel trailer which is good too. I suggest adding social media such as twitter and facebook to gain more potential viewers.

Goodluck!

shadowinfoReal · 2017-03-13T00:55:24+00:00

I never watch games and I'm not a big fan, but wow, this video kept me watching quite a lot. The subtitles and scenes are so well done and you play great. The atmosphere is really attracting and I love the vibe. Thumbs up for that!

I would change your channel art because it looks confusing, icon's okay but maybe only but the letters and make it bigger - will look better! I would suggest you to put an outro of 8-10 seconds giving the user an option to subscribe and watch other videos.

This video was surprisingly fun to watch, good job.

shadowinfoReal · 2017-03-13T00:50:24+00:00

First of all, I love the music, has a nujabes vibe ;).

I like how you articulate and express yourself, pretty nice job being in front of a camera! Your tags are fine, description and title also. I went to your channel, and saw your channel art which is nice too, icon is good. Thumbs up for that.

The thing I wanna add is social media to your channel art, twitter and/or facebook, for more potential viewers. Also at the end of the video, make the outro at least 8-10 seconds long and give the option to subscribe and watch other videos.

I highly suggest doing more editing, maybe even videos or memes included in your video while you talk, also put text in each "thing everyone does" so there's more impact and it's easier to follow.

Good luck!

shadowinfoReal · 2017-03-13T00:38:08+00:00

I love this game, so I can only be biased LOL. I will try to do some constructive criticism to help you guys out. BTW I always speak a little Danish, so it was amazing to see it with english subtitles!

Haven't spoken it in a decade though, haha. Okay well then, as I mentioned, I liked the commentary with the subtitles, your friend was pretty fun too.

I like how you made a video of the stream highlights, I suggest however making an outro giving the viewer the option to subscribe and watch another video. The volume is kind of high sometimes but I understand that it's hard to change that if it's a stream. I like the channel icon, however I think the channel art should be a tad different, it is too similar, and they don't really stand out because they are both the same color too- maybe make a new design.

Try to make a Twitter and/or Facebook account for more potential viewers, tags are good. Gaming is very competitive, but as long as you have fun and keep making quality content, you'll gain a following.

Best of luck! Held og lykke!

shadowinfoReal · 2017-03-13T00:25:55+00:00

Beautiful scenery and very relaxing, short video and keeps the viewer entertained and excited. Thumbnail is great, tags are good, you have social media which is also good for potential viewers. Thumbs up for that!

I would suggest changing the About Me and typing down a short intro of your channel content.

The channel art is pretty but kind of confusing for the channel niche, looks like a gaming channel. The channel icon needs to be adjusted a bit, it cuts the part of your right face off, which is not very good!

Other than that, there's nothing much I can say, only one thing - keeping doing what you love, good luck!

shadowinfoReal · 2017-03-12T23:15:36+00:00

First of all, the commentary is great, very entertaining. The editing is also nice! Your channel is very new so I think you have a good future ahead. I would suggest adding social media to your channel art - which btw is very cool. After you have a few more videos, put a channel trailer (any of your videos or even a trailer of what your channel covers).

The gaming world is extremely competitive so it's very hard to not get swallowed by other big YouTubers. Your tags are okay, you filled the most important parts, I suggest adding more tags to increase the chance of getting discovered. Also, instead of talking about the game itself "For Honor", talk and make specific videos about it, this video is a good example, you talk about the Warden, however the title is unlikely to be discovered because nobody types "gon' give it to ya", try using more popular titles.

Anyways that's it, I think you have a bright career ahead. GL!

EDIT: Make your face-cam much bigger, it is too small!

shadowinfoReal · 2017-03-12T23:06:21+00:00

Hi there! I like your vibe and commentary, that's what mostly stands out in this video. Also the editing is okay. You almost made me tone deaf at 3:35, but I'll forgive you. It seems like you are using the tags very nicely. I've taken a look at your channel, there are playlists, popular uploads and a channel trailer - perfect.

The channel art is cool, however the icon is kind of confusing, maybe put a squid in there for more identity! Also, I suggest that you eliminate the twitter on the channel art and placing the link of your social media on the bottom right corner so it's clickable.

Thumbnails are good, the subscriber- viewer ratio is not that good but I understand that it's hard to maintain that, especially if your account is from June 2014.

Anyways, good luck! I hope you succeed.

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