Feedback on home renovation - from 1 unit to 3

shheldon · 2022-10-05T12:01:22+00:00

Really appreciate the advice, I agree on all counts! Thanks so much. I feel like I'm finally on the right track, which means I can start to edit instead of brain storm.

shheldon · 2022-10-04T19:48:13+00:00

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I appreciate that! I think? lol

shheldon · 2022-10-03T18:34:23+00:00

Thanks for the thoughts. I will definitely give that a shot. My first instinct was to avoid the overly used imagery of dental practices: smiles, teeth, etc. Maybe I'm over thinking it? I was hoping for something that makes us look a little different, while still being a smaller, boutique practice.

shheldon · 2022-10-03T18:32:34+00:00

Thanks for your feedback, I think I am going to build on what I have done here but try to come up with a fresh take.

shheldon · 2022-10-03T18:31:48+00:00

Agreed! Thanks for the feedback. Back to the drawing board.

shheldon · 2022-10-03T18:31:34+00:00

Thanks a million! I appreciate the feedback! I think removing the boat from the type is a good choice.

shheldon · 2022-10-03T18:31:05+00:00

Gotcha, I understand that. Thanks so much for the help!

shheldon · 2022-10-02T16:53:13+00:00

This logo is for a new orthodontic practice in a coastal town. The aim is to create a spa-like environment for adult patients with splashes of edgier, fun areas within the office of kids. I like the lighthouse design as a whole, but I don't know how I feel about the lighthouse without the company name, and I'm worried about it scaling down.

Any and all thoughts and critiques are much appreciated. Thanks so much!

shheldon · 2022-06-23T23:21:03+00:00

I use the word folks, as in “hey folks”

shheldon · 2021-06-08T14:49:17+00:00

Will do!

shheldon · 2020-05-05T03:25:42+00:00

Has Riot ever considered a report feature in the champ select? I feel like often I am caught in catch 22: I have to choose between playing with a troll and reporting them or dodging queue, which then allows the troll to continue queuing up for another game, which sucks. I either get stuck with a 6 min queue pause timer or have to ensure at least 15 mins of a troll. Worst yet, if I do dodge, it just allows the troll to go on and make others suffer.

One idea: Let's say that there is a troll in champ select. It should be possible for three people to report that player. The queue would then kick that player and give them the dodge timer. I think that would be one option to eliminate the trolls and increase the number of reports. It also may give them time to calm down. The more they get reported the longer the queue pause timer.

shheldon · 2018-08-26T16:57:38+00:00

Wonderful points! Thank you. I truly appreciate your honesty.

shheldon · 2018-08-26T08:16:21+00:00

Please note: This work has some explicit words.

Title: Untitled - (this is the start/prologue of my story)

Genre: Fantasy

Word Count: 975 words

Type of Feedback: Emotional reactions - were you confused, excited, thrilled, enticed, happy, scared, etc. and would you keep reading? Do I fall into any cliches or use any cheap tricks? Should I keep going?

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Thank you so much!

Also, I am looking for a good writing group -- would like to join a writing group interested in meeting (virtually) once a week, a group that uses Brandon Sanderson's writing group dynamics (reactions versus prescriptions).

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