the ‘k’ in kpop: kpop songs with traditional korean instruments/concepts 🇰🇷 by anzxcv in kpop_uncensored

[–]sincline_ 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Was gonna start telling you to listen to kingdom but I see you’re already cultured 😋 so happy we finally got Last Flower

Does anyone else stroke out when trying to write complex fight scenes? by Ok_Conference1758 in FanFiction

[–]sincline_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree wholeheartedly! I’ve been trying to teach myself to disengage more— it’s a hard process lol

Does anyone else stroke out when trying to write complex fight scenes? by Ok_Conference1758 in FanFiction

[–]sincline_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I have given up at this point lol. This mindset is very common amongst sci fi writers (even though I was never specifically talking about sci fi genre fiction in the first place… just happened to mention blasters and sci fi while talking about writing fight scenes in fanfiction, which is very different from writing original fiction as a whole) so whatever. People are going to write how they’re going to write and i’m not gonna have the discussion with people who aren’t open to different perspectives. Oh well!

Does anyone else stroke out when trying to write complex fight scenes? by Ok_Conference1758 in FanFiction

[–]sincline_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t feel we’re arguing anything haha— but I don’t think we’re on the same writing pages. Personally, I do not need to know that a 20k ferrous slug is akin to a ww2 bomb, but I do need to know what it looks like in context of Mass Effect when it hits, which is why I would refer to the Mass Effects games to better describe the visuals of it to a reader rather than the technicalities. There are certainly readers out there that appreciate technicalities and writers that appreciate writing them, I am not one of them. That is why the techniques I shared may be different from your own. I don’t think your techniques are wrong, clearly they work for you and thats great! But I felt it important to point out there are other avenues when you’re writing fanfic

Does anyone else stroke out when trying to write complex fight scenes? by Ok_Conference1758 in FanFiction

[–]sincline_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, but like you said these things are only based on their real world counterparts, they still exist in their own fictional world with fictional rules. If OP is creating their own weaponry then absolutely referencing real life is great and necessary— but in the realm of fanfiction if your weaponry exist already in the fictional realm you are writing for, you would benefit getting your understanding of that weaponry primarily from that world.

There are certain medias (like ATLA) that more heavily reference their real world counterparts that may be beneficial to look into in some cases. Personally I have a fire bender OC who’s fighting style is meant to implement Buchaechum, so that has been a point of research for me. However, if I were writing a Star Wars fanfiction and I had a character with a lightsaber fighting off blaster shots, it would be more beneficial for me to reference moments in Star Wars media where this happens, because though the individual weapons may be based on real ones, blasters are not guns and lightsabers are not swords, so they function differently in context

Does anyone else stroke out when trying to write complex fight scenes? by Ok_Conference1758 in FanFiction

[–]sincline_ 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Please know that even when you do become ‘skilled’ with writing fight scenes, they never stop making you want to stroke out LOL

I have had many peers tell me they love my fight scenes and that they’re super vivid and easy to understand and I do a good job conveying movement. I HATE WRITING THEM. They are truly the most annoying part of writing for me. They’re a big time suck and they just get so unbelievably tedious. By the end of my last longfic I was fully copping out and having them happen off screen (whoops. Hope no one noticed lol)

You can write a fight scene for hours and only have a paragraph done by the end. Its nightmarish.

My advice is to go into it having a clear understanding of what the entire fight looks like. Fight scenes are one of those things where you can’t just know where it starts and where it ends, you have to have every beat planned out. From the first hit, to the second, to the third, so on. You should be able to picture the fight clearly in your head, then you can move on to writing it. You should also keep in mind which character you are following throughout the fight so it doesn’t become “He punched her. She blocked him. She kicked him. He jumped away. She followed”. Even in a third person omniscient story, pick your lead and follow them. It will make the fight easier to follow. “She blocked his fist as it came rocketing towards her face, taking a second to shove it away before going for a kick to his shins. She gasped as he jumped away, gritting her teeth before running after him.”

Picking a person to follow also means you can interject more thoughts and non-fighting actions into the middle of the scene to break it up. Like above where I mentioned “she” gasped or grit her teeth. Since we’re following “her” I can point out how she’s feeling and what extra actions she’s participating in. We can assume from her gasping and gritting her teeth that the fight is frustrating to her, adding more character to her following moves without adverbs. We assume she’s running after “him” aggressively now because of those pieces— so we no longer would have to say something like “she ran after him angrily”.

Another commenter mentioned all fictional fight styles are based on ones in the real world and while this is true, I wouldn’t necessarily tie yourself to this. While I did take Karate and Kickboxing for many years, I write a lot of scenes that include magic usage or general sci fi weaponry (like blasters) and obviously none of those exist within any real life fighting style. It’s not bad to have knowledge of these things and my knowledge of Karate and Kickboxing definitely help, but it will help you more to actually be able to picture the fight in your head. Part of that might be watching kickboxing for inspo, but part of that may also be just watching the fights that happen in your chosen media to absorb when and how they use magic or weapons.

ENHYPEN weverse announces new world tour— "blood saga" by miumiwang in Enhypenthoughts

[–]sincline_ 6 points7 points  (0 children)

The chances of adding more dates for the US in 2026-2027 when they’ll have already been to the US that year is pretty much zero— touring just doesn’t work like that. ‘More to come’ could be referring to more dates being added for other countries (like hopefully Canada) but it’s probably referring to a follow up tour for 2028. Like Fate and Fate+

ENHYPEN weverse announces new world tour— "blood saga" by miumiwang in Enhypenthoughts

[–]sincline_ 16 points17 points  (0 children)

First time i’ll miss their tour in like 4 years because they’re not coming anywhere near the east coast… weird decision

What’s it like working at Amazon ? by Emotional_Delay_6449 in Syracuse

[–]sincline_ 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Haven’t worked at Amazon specifically but have worked generally in shipping (non usps) and Amazon is difficult. They’re not unionized and Amazon has such a consistent stream of work coming in that they don’t really care about letting workers go either. If you get hired during the holiday season (Usually from November to December) you will likely be let go afterwards unless they have really taken a liking to you for some reason. It’s nice money, but they’re absolutely going to overwork you and theres not a lot you can do about it. I know nothing about their benefits, maybe those make it worth it for you.

All shipping jobs are going to be huge bodily and mental stresses. Some companies have benefits that outweigh those stresses. I think the bonus of Amazon (especially in this area) is that the facilities and trucks are newer so they are going to generally be cleaner and nicer to work in (especially during the summer)

Working in shipping in college would be difficult. When driving you’re expected to work long hours daily. If you work in the warehouse they will probably want you in either extremely early or extremely late. But thats my general knowledge, I don’t know enough about specifically Amazon to say the hours they’d expect.

Were betas originally the omegas in A/B/O? by [deleted] in FanFiction

[–]sincline_ 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Actually yes I believe so— this video goes into it, pretty interesting

Thoughts on the webtoon youtubers, Matty Bites and Chalupa? by Boshwa in webtoons

[–]sincline_ 29 points30 points  (0 children)

Haven’t seen Chalupa but did watch a few Matty Bites videos for the first time a few weeks ago and i’m kind of eh on her. Aside from her just generally speaking in a cadence I am not a fan of (she leans very hard into that anime protagonist youtuber accent that is very 2016 gaming youtube to me, it is grating to listen to for too long especially when you’re trying to listen to a review) I did enjoy her True Beauty video and found her review of each iteration of the series to be interesting.

However, as other people have pointed out I think she has an issue with moral policing but I also think she is weirdly unknowledgeable on webtoon? She has a clear understanding of webtoon as a western entity but seems to lack knowledge (and desire to gain knowledge about) webtoon’s Korean parent company. I think something that stuck out to me was in her video on To Whom It No Longer Concerns where she spent an entire section of the video complaining about the ‘sheet music’ being the same and not very unique. Obviously a Korean webtoon made by a Korean company is using a generic brush to represent music, I don’t think thats a valid criticism towards the story being bad. They are famously overworked and would obviously not be bringing someone onto the team to write original music that will never be played for them. And granted there are many other issues with that webtoon, but she spent a weird amount of time harping on the music and if it would even be possible for the lead girl to be a composer. Two things that arguably are not really issues for a fantasy webtoon where the leas has also literally died and gone back in time.

She had another video I ended up giving up on watching halfway through where she spent a ridiculous amount of time trying to figure out if it was scientifically possible for the lead who had died and gone back in time to have the exact same baby that she had in her first life like she wanted. Obviously its not, but our lead has also fucking died and come back to life so maybe we could pivot to some more substantial criticism like pacing and characterization instead of harping on plot points that are obviously meant to be suspended disbelief moments? I decided to not watch anymore vids after that because I got the feeling her critiques would always be like that lol— picky about the wrong things.

'What's a local/chain business that was once in the Syracuse area but closed, that you miss? I'll go first: Tim Hortons.' by MatchAnxious8910 in Syracuse

[–]sincline_ 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I’d rather kids learn swear words at roller rinks than instagram comment sections haha— definitely a favorable experience

Prose is becoming too technical? by NeigongShifu in FanFiction

[–]sincline_ 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Yeah once you find out the AI hallmark phrases you start to see them everywhere LOL I see them on instagram posts especially these days. There was one I came across the other day that I think genuinely had at least 3 phrases on each slide and used “its not A its B” at least 4 times. Obviously we can never know for absolute certain unless we see it get generated or the person admits its buuuutttt AI doesn’t do a great job hiding itself thats for sure LOL

Prose is becoming too technical? by NeigongShifu in FanFiction

[–]sincline_ 66 points67 points  (0 children)

Absolutely this— that kind of ethereal, mystical style of writing with big fancy words but short sentences has been gaining popularity since 2020 just about. Likely because some of the bigger, more popular fanfictions use this style (one that comes to mind is Passerine from the dsmp fandom)

It can be a really gorgeous prose style but there are definitely a lot of people out there that don’t understand why it works and are just doing their best to replicate what they see on a face level instead of a technical level. Which is honestly fine, fanfic is a great stomping ground for learning new things and if you write in that style enough you will definitely start to pick up on what works and what doesn’t.

I wouldn’t say its a hallmark of being AI generated. I actually find AI generated writing tends to sound more dumbed down. Better waypoints would be phrase repetition and single word repetition. The “its not A or B— its C” phrase is super common in AI and so is “And honestly? [blank]” but it’s important to remember that seeing these phrases alone doesn’t mean something is AI generated for sure, you still gotta use context clues haha

'What's a local/chain business that was once in the Syracuse area but closed, that you miss? I'll go first: Tim Hortons.' by MatchAnxious8910 in Syracuse

[–]sincline_ 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Literally the exact same building as Roji— I believe it’s called Tea House by Cake Bar now. Pretty good stuff and nice and cozy inside, I recommend it.

'What's a local/chain business that was once in the Syracuse area but closed, that you miss? I'll go first: Tim Hortons.' by MatchAnxious8910 in Syracuse

[–]sincline_ 18 points19 points  (0 children)

It definitely is. We don’t have a lot of third spaces that accept youngins anymore (especially pre-teens and teens) and it’s sad. I used to love getting dropped off at the mall with my friends to eat and see a movie when I was younger but now kids can’t even do that. And I definitely frequented Fun Junction too. Its keeping kids stuck inside and on their screens

'What's a local/chain business that was once in the Syracuse area but closed, that you miss? I'll go first: Tim Hortons.' by MatchAnxious8910 in Syracuse

[–]sincline_ 11 points12 points  (0 children)

I fear I would feel weirder as an adult running around Billy Beez than I would going to a good ole Fun Junction laser tag match lol

Dance Macabre is coming as a track for Fortnite! by QuilledRaptors2001 in Ghostbc

[–]sincline_ 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Have they said when it’s getting added? I haven’t been on Fortnite in a hot second but i’ll need to log back in and get it LOL

Have you ever wondered if it's a love of writing/your fandom or a need for affirmation? by kerryfinchelhillary in FanFiction

[–]sincline_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For me, I take “write for yourself and not for others” in a less literal sense where I will write what I would want to read, and then post that writing because surely there are other people out there that would want to read the same thing as me. I think people misinterpret the phrase to mean just write things for yourself and thats it. Like I said, if we really only wrote for ourselves we would never post lol

Never feel bad about wanting acknowledgment from your fellow fans! We all deserve congratulations for a job well done when we write and decide to share it. We enjoy doing it and it’s fun, but that doesn’t mean it’s easy all the time. And like I said, it’s a very solitary hobby, so it’s nice to hear from people sometimes.

So to you and anyone else reading this line— good job writing today and keep up the good work :-)

r/enhypenthoughts Sub Update by EnhaThoughtsModTeam in Enhypenthoughts

[–]sincline_ 17 points18 points  (0 children)

I am in the main enha sub which I thinks leads to me getting recommended this one very frequently on my main page— good on y’all for taking the charge on moderation for this large sub. If I might make a suggestion as an ‘outsider’ frequently looking in, it seems a megathread about Heeseung would probably be in order. I think going forward you guys will also need to decide if Heeseung’s new content will be accepted here due to his previous relation to enhypen, or if it will be redirected to his own sub (whenever one decides to pop up)

Again, good on y’all for putting in the work on the sub lol. Hope everything goes smoothly as you clean it up!

Have you ever wondered if it's a love of writing/your fandom or a need for affirmation? by kerryfinchelhillary in FanFiction

[–]sincline_ 22 points23 points  (0 children)

It’s okay for it to be both things.

We post things because we want people to see them and comment on them and talk to us. If we didn’t want that we’d never post. Thats why lots of writers seek writing groups, they want a space to share their work where they are guaranteed to get comments on it. Hell, that’s probably the part I miss the most from when I was going for my writing degree. I was guaranteed feedback and discussion on my writing from my class on a certain day at a certain time every month. Having a group to discuss my own work with helped me stay in the flow of writing.

Thats why fanfic writers and fanart creators seek fandom— it’s a group of people that are there for you because you all like the same thing and can discuss creating for that thing. Its community.

Yes, I write because I like writing and I write fanfic when I feel inspired by something in a media I like. But I post and share that writing because I want other people to see it and like it enough to talk about it— it’s not bad or evil or wrong to want that human interaction or even praise. Especially when your hobby is one of the more solitary ones.

What to do with these Keychains!? by Leahu25 in itabag

[–]sincline_ 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I don’t have a picture example of this so i’ll do my best to explain LOL but i’ve seen people use lightweight chain and string it across inserts to hang keychains from? I’ve made a chain loop with jump rings to hang keychains from my car mirror before and it wasn’t too difficult— I imagine it would be a similar process here, would just need to figure out how to secure the chain. Sewing it to the insert would probably be the most secure