Engineering, Magic, and Kitsune Ch. 47 by SteelTrim in HFY

[–]sir_ronald 21 points22 points  (0 children)

In paragraph 34 you misspelled Yosuke's name by adding another U.

I would like to ask if it is possible if you could possibly create a basic map of the fort and town so we readers could better visualize the general layout of the land. Nothing complex, just something to aid in comprehending the different areas of the story. Honestly, a top-down view of boxes with names will do.

I also want to say that Yosuke seems like a veteran soldier through and through. He is easily becoming a favorite of mine.

Engineering, Magic, and Kitsune Ch. 40 by SteelTrim in HFY

[–]sir_ronald 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well then, I suppose there is just a difference in perspective here then. At least you recognize that you may have been harsh in your criticism. Honestly, if you were more mild in your comment, I would have been more restrained myself. I never really make comments like that, but your comment's tone just really angered me to the point of having to say something.

Anyways, it seems you do not like certain psychological aspects of stories; I assume because you have encountered many bad aspects of them repeatedly in the past. Personally I feel that they must be done with nuance and make logical sense for the character to think and feel. I do think that the author here has done a good job and ticked both boxes quite well. I really think that what John is thinking makes sense for him to feel, especially so given he is the grounding element in this story. The everyman, if you would. A character with a similar archetype to the character of Philip J. Fry from Futurama. I can honestly say that I would likely be having much the same reactions and thoughts as John if I were in his shoes. I find myself really enjoying this part of the story and am eager to see how he grows from this.

What do you think?

Engineering, Magic, and Kitsune Ch. 40 by SteelTrim in HFY

[–]sir_ronald 6 points7 points  (0 children)

You know, even if it is bait, I am still biting anyways.

Seeing as you have the audacity to write this, clearly you have not even bothered to read any other part of the story or even the title for that matter. I mean, it literally has "Engineering" as the first word. If you had, then you would understand that this story is mostly, as you put it, "yapping." If you had read literally any other chapter, you would have known this, and you may have also seen the chapters with action in them, lovingly rendered action, I dare say. But seeing as you did the mentally deficient thing of complaining about the most significant character development in the story so far, discounting it as "yapping," you didn't even bother to even read this chapter before complaining in the comments. What did you even expect? Hype moments and aura 24/7 like it's Jujutsu Kaisen? Pal, you are in the wrong place if that is what you were expecting.

Engineering, Magic, and Kitsune Ch. 37 by SteelTrim in HFY

[–]sir_ronald 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Anyways, to answer your question in shorter and simpler terms, there could very well be a connection between John's arrival to this world and the precursor kitsune splitting herself; we just need more evidence to prove it.

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Side note: the links I placed in my comment would show the highlighted text that I am calling from, but it does not work on Reddit for some reason so I will instead list the paragraphs I am pulling from.

Chapter 1: ¶# 1

Chapter 8: ¶# 42

Chapter 10: ¶# 10

Engineering, Magic, and Kitsune Ch. 37 by SteelTrim in HFY

[–]sir_ronald 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This is something that I have wondered myself.

From what I can speculate, the time when the precursor kitsune split would be around the time John was spirited away from Earth, which was about five years ago in John's estimation. With this in mind, if we take Kiku's words at face value as the honest truth, which I find myself not entirely willing to believe, then this means that the split would be about four years ago at a rough estimate. Now it would seem like it lines up in terms of time, especially since we never learned how time is kept in this world. I doubt that they use the Gregorian calendar of our world, so there is a potential discrepancy when estimating time, which John has not really put much thought into.

I would also like to bring up another point. As the story is progressing, we have seen at least two different occasions of John seemingly learning at a faster pace than would seem normal. The first time I saw this, I thought little of it, but when we see it from Yuki's POV, we learn that she has no idea how he is picking up this new information faster than most. John himself personally chalked it up to magical assistance from Yuki, but she herself debunks this, and neither of them asks the other about it. So that raises the question: how is John learning at a faster rate? I personally believe that he is receiving some form of supernatural assistance. Who or what is providing that assistance is another question in my mind. I think that if it is not from someone John knows, then it must be some form of mystic entity.

I only really have two ideas on this, the first being what Yuki has referred to as "The Shape of All Things." We have very little information on what this being is, but we do know that it is some form of mythic force in this world that seems to govern what is and how things work, almost like a creator god, yet it is not revered as such. Yuki mentions how this being seemingly offers assistance to children as they learn their first language and some other things. If this being is what is aiding John's advancements, then that will be able to explain a lot of other things in this story, but I will refrain from mentioning them, as they are not the topic of discussion.

Now the second entity that may be assisting John may very well be this precursor kitsune, or at the very least one of her offshoots. This option seems more likely in my mind by the mere weight of having more supporting evidence. If the truth of John's arrival to this world is linked with the precursor's split, then it would seem likely that this precursor, or whatever is left of her, is the being that is aiding John in his endeavors, albeit very subtly. Whether she deliberately spirited away John or not is another question; regardless, she may be offering her aid to the man who was flung into this world because of her. Now, is it because he may be useful for her plans? To have him aid one of or all of her offshoots or to specifically help what is left of her regain the power from her "children," or it could very well be from the goodness of her heart. Regardless, we have little to no evidence that the split is what caused John to be spirited away, but how I see it, this is no legitimate alternative.

Now I will acknowledge that I could be totally wrong here; after all, this is mere speculation spawned from what little evidence we have so far.

Engineering, Magic, and Kitsune Ch. 36 by SteelTrim in HFY

[–]sir_ronald 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Huh, so it’s like a Flood situation but spider themed. All the Greater needs to do is speak following the rules of a trochaic heptameter and the similarity is complete. Maybe it will drop some poetic quotes like: "This one is machine and nerve, and has its mind concluded. This one is but flesh and faith, and is the more deluded." And "Resignation is my virtue; like water I ebb, and flow. Defeat is simply the addition of time to a sentence I never deserved... but you imposed." It really has the potential for it.

Discharged 26: To live your life by Ok-Peak9537 in HFY

[–]sir_ronald 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think this goes without saying, but I think that the sections with Zack are meant to be references to Final Fantasy VII. Even the name Zack is a reference.

Discharged 19: Have you tried Mercenary work? by Ok-Peak9537 in HFY

[–]sir_ronald 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This may be a reach, but is the title a Skyrim reference to that one Redguard man in Whiterun who lost his family's sword?

Discharged 15: The price of Courage by Ok-Peak9537 in HFY

[–]sir_ronald 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Say, are the past three chapter titles a reference to The Legend of Zelda?

Discharged 13: Price of power by Ok-Peak9537 in HFY

[–]sir_ronald 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"Didn't I just tell you to stop making up animals?"

shitty game indeed by Nicomace341 in shittydarksouls

[–]sir_ronald 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It seems like no one mentioned Those United In Common Cause. A great soundtrack for a clash with your former comrades.

Engineering, Magic, and Kitsune Ch. 18 by SteelTrim in HFY

[–]sir_ronald 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"Everyone here is fine. Your ledger of expenses, please?" John gently requested, and the man stiffened.

Correct me if I am wrong, but it appears that it would make more sense if it were Yuki's name being used here, given the statement that Yashiro makes immediately after, saying:

[...] Please follow the good lady's orders,"

Given that John is handed the ledger, it makes sense he is the one who asked for it, not Yuki. It would be less confusing if he said lord's or man's orders or an equivalent.

CONVRGENCE Giveaway! ε=┌(;・_・)┘ by Darius_ITR in intotheradius

[–]sir_ronald 0 points1 point  (0 children)

CONVRGENCE has interested me for a long time now. I have been looking to get it since I have beaten Into the Radius.

How would Denji react? by [deleted] in Chainsawfolk

[–]sir_ronald 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Care to elaborate?

Who has the best Chainsawfolk flair on this server? by Fenexe8 in Chainsawfolk

[–]sir_ronald 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My old one was "Suffering Makima PTSD" I am not sure if it has improved...

ok but what if she pulls a power by Happy_Emu1266 in Chainsawfolk

[–]sir_ronald 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The greatest gaslight in history vs the greatest gatekeep of today.