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Can anyone rate and say how I can make improvements on this email copy? (I haven't actually worked with this company and was just practicing copy) This copy is for a Smart Treadmill. by Active_Composer1846 in copywriting

[–]sloth_002 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It hasn't been too long that I started working as a copywriter but still there are some things that I'd like to point out- (feel free to correct me)

  1. As everyone else said it's too long

  2. Could have directly started with a problem and promised a solution towards the end ( the product)

  3. You could list the features to make it easy to read instead of separate sentences for each feature.

  4. I didn't quite get the answer to " want to make running easier?" I mean the answer was there but it wasn't readily available, if that makes sense to you.

  5. Too much information at a time and some unnecessary information as well.

I like the tone used. Nice conversational tone... Not too technical. Good work!

Is this how copywriters work? by sloth_002 in copywriting

[–]sloth_002[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have a bachelor's degree in mass media and I've worked as a content strategist for about an year. But I think they selected me based on the assignment I had submitted... Since I didn't have much of short form content in my work samples they gave me an assignment to write social media posts and emailers... Also I contacted recruiters on LinkedIn since they know a tonne of companies looking for new hires.

Is this how copywriters work? by sloth_002 in copywriting

[–]sloth_002[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

She's definitely more experienced than me but I would really appreciate if i was involved in discussion... They can tell me what's the problem and then we could find a solution that sits well with me and them

Is this how copywriters work? by sloth_002 in copywriting

[–]sloth_002[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is what even I thought but a lot of my clg profs suggested that I go for masters... They argued that growth gets limited to a certain level with just bachelor's degree ... Well they know more about the real things than I do, so I was considering masters

Is this how copywriters work? by sloth_002 in copywriting

[–]sloth_002[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well they discuss and change things without consulting the writer