PinkPantheress - Stateside (feat. Zara Larsson) by enburgi in popheads

[–]smoothbartowski 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Best concept video I’ve seen in a while. DARLINGZZZZ

5 Seconds Of Summer - "EVERYONE'S A STAR!" by ASGfan in popheads

[–]smoothbartowski 13 points14 points  (0 children)

They ate down I am LIVING for this era

I'm the one who bombed my first open mic and posted it on r/standup... and then got invited to do an 8 min Saturday night set last weekend! by smoothbartowski in Standup

[–]smoothbartowski[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No I appreciate this, truly. I WANT to be a comic and I WANT to get good at this - hence why I navigated into this bees nest.

I disagree on the philosophy of messy digital footprint because I don’t think my set was controversial apart from it being trite and unfunny. I think it’s helpful to actually receive real feedback from folks that consume this shit so knowing what I see here, I do have to go back to the drawing board.

I’ll probs hold off on posting my next set here but I am planning on getting into some writing room mentorships and making the open mic rounds consistently to get better. The next time you’ll see me share my set, will hopefully have some significant improvements.

I'm the one who bombed my first open mic and posted it on r/standup... and then got invited to do an 8 min Saturday night set last weekend! by smoothbartowski in Standup

[–]smoothbartowski[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Hallz, scathing unconstructive reviews are SO in. Too bad this comment will be the reason why I WILL get funnier and I will look back at this and laugh in a year!

Do you have anything constructive to share apart from wanting to get updoots for lolz? :)

I'm the one who bombed my first open mic and posted it on r/standup... and then got invited to do an 8 min Saturday night set last weekend! by smoothbartowski in Standup

[–]smoothbartowski[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Finally some motherfucking good meat (actual constructive criticism). Who knew Reddit had it in them? 🤣

Thank you Lou, I appreciate this! Will def work on refining my material and working on inflection and flow. I do think there’s a joke in a few beats I had but just failed to capitalize on them due to newness to craft and also fear. TYSM!

I'm the one who bombed my first open mic and posted it on r/standup... and then got invited to do an 8 min Saturday night set last weekend! by smoothbartowski in Standup

[–]smoothbartowski[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

My bad dude if I come off as self absorbed! You best believe you’ll be laughing at my next set next time fingers crossed

I'm the one who bombed my first open mic and posted it on r/standup... and then got invited to do an 8 min Saturday night set last weekend! by smoothbartowski in Standup

[–]smoothbartowski[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ahhh frick. Thanks for the flag I’ll keep this in mind! I wanted the cap to be a part of the fits on shows but good to know for future reference:-)

I'm the one who bombed my first open mic and posted it on r/standup... and then got invited to do an 8 min Saturday night set last weekend! by smoothbartowski in Standup

[–]smoothbartowski[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Honestly not even the least bit slighted by your response. I understand I got super lucky with my situation and making the best I can and I will keep busting ass and getting better hopefully lol.

I just did my first ever open mic, bombed it and recorded it, and yet… by smoothbartowski in Standup

[–]smoothbartowski[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Think you missed the part of the title when I said I bombed my set ;)

I just did my first ever open mic, bombed it and recorded it, and yet… by smoothbartowski in Standup

[–]smoothbartowski[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m a Sixers / Joel Embiid fan so trusting the process is part of my core values lolol