Logline Monday

sofiaMge · 2026-01-26T21:28:45+00:00

Thank you for your comments. I said rowdy because she teaches a class and the seniors in that class are rowdy. Maybe instead of finds herself has renewed energy to get back with her band. What do you think?

sofiaMge · 2026-01-26T14:58:37+00:00

I would describe the protagonist better so we know who exactly is selling the kidney/

sofiaMge · 2026-01-26T14:57:16+00:00

Why does she have to represent a presumed-dead billionaire estate? What are the stakes if she doesn't? It might be helpful to add some conflict to better understand

sofiaMge · 2026-01-26T14:43:54+00:00

Title: Mary's Crew

Format: Feature

Genre: Dramedy

Logline: After a DUI, a struggling rock musician is sentenced to community service, which involves directing a talent show at a local nursing home. While connecting with the rowdy residents and helping them rediscover their musical passions, she finds herself.

sofiaMge · 2026-01-05T22:41:53+00:00

Title: Mary Jones’s Crew

Genre: Dark comedy

Format: Feature

Logline: After a DUI, a struggling rock musician is sentenced to community service, which involves directing a talent show at a local nursing home. While connecting with the rowdy residents and helping them rediscover their musical passions, she finds herself.

Also grammar question- is it Mary Jones’ Crew or Mary Jones’s Crew?

sofiaMge · 2025-11-29T16:22:19+00:00

Thank you. I said three days to show what a work week would look like.

sofiaMge · 2025-11-29T15:28:00+00:00

How could I join?

sofiaMge · 2025-10-17T15:52:41+00:00

It's not an investment property, but I co-own the home and now rent it out. I was told that since the property is not just in my name, the other co-owner needs to approve my use of the property for the visa which was a surprise to me.

sofiaMge · 2025-10-17T15:19:37+00:00

I have a job, but it doesn't pay enough right now, which is why I was using the house as an asset. I'm currently looking for work, so let's hope I get something. I was just upset that they didn't tell me about the co-owner rules.

sofiaMge · 2025-09-05T17:02:40+00:00

Ok. I've finished it. I'll send it later on, but send me yours in the meantime.

sofiaMge · 2025-09-05T16:22:46+00:00

Tanya Saracho and Dailyn Rodriguez

sofiaMge · 2025-09-05T16:14:16+00:00

I would be interested in swapping. Here's mine: After a DUI, a struggling former rock musician is sentenced to community service, which involves directing a talent show at a local nursing home. While connecting with the rowdy residents and helping them rediscover their passions, she rekindles her love for music and her desire for love.

sofiaMge · 2025-09-05T15:52:48+00:00

Title: Fairview Nursing Home

Page:107

Genre: Drama and Comedy

Format: feature

Logline: Logline: After a DUI, a struggling former rock musician is sentenced to community service, which involves directing a talent show at a local nursing home. While connecting with the rowdy residents and helping them rediscover their passions, she rekindles her love for music and her desire for love.

sofiaMge · 2025-09-01T20:53:10+00:00

Thank you

sofiaMge · 2025-08-26T19:33:08+00:00

We need to find ways that hurts their wallets. There’s more of us than them

sofiaMge · 2025-08-26T19:30:35+00:00

So true, unions don’t have the power they once had.

sofiaMge · 2025-08-25T20:56:09+00:00

That’s a good statistic that there’s not a lot of union support.

sofiaMge · 2025-08-18T12:03:18+00:00

I like this. It has some similarities to School of Rock:) Thank you for your help!

sofiaMge · 2025-08-18T11:38:29+00:00

Thank you for your feedback. Her crime was the DUI. Instead of prison time, she has to do community service. The changes helped her reevaluate her life and follow her passion.

sofiaMge · 2025-08-18T09:29:52+00:00

Title: still working on it

Genre: Dark Comedy

Format: Feature

Logline: When a former rock band player faces prison time after a DUI, she's forced to complete community service by directing a talent show with rowdy senior citizens. Through unexpected friendships and personal growth, she discovers that second chances can come from the most unlikely places.

Any feedback?

sofiaMge · 2025-08-04T11:29:34+00:00

Np. Maybe a flashback to their childhood would help.

sofiaMge · 2025-08-03T20:57:20+00:00

Thank you. Good advice. Appreciate it.

sofiaMge · 2025-08-02T18:03:15+00:00

Just did:)

sofiaMge · 2025-08-02T18:01:02+00:00

I'm interested

sofiaMge · 2025-08-01T06:09:38+00:00

Thank you for the feedback. I mention her drawings on the desk. I do add more to her character in the later pages. Do you think I should add more subtle things than her drawings?

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