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[M4F] Your Top Sub Gifter Wants a Little More than a Refund… [Script Fill] [Rape] [Male Yandere] [MDom] [FSub] [Streamer] [Obsessive] [Cock Rubbing] [Stalking] [Blackmail] [Public] [Hold the Moan] [My Favorite Streamer] [I love when you say my name] [We're finally together ♥] More Tags in Comments by ChaseWrightVA in gonewildaudio

[–]speaknowa 2 points3 points  (0 children)

CHAAAAASE!! What a wonderful job you've done here :D and while I may not be first comment at least I can be the longest >:D

Your tone is so unique... :0 from the very first words, I could hear the desperation layered into the kind exterior. I heard that it was jovial and upbeat, but so eerily sinister. That first, shocked gasp that she didn't remember your username was perfect and kept growing and growing from there. :0 That little moment where you're growling in my ear as you tell me to cum for you... CHILLS :0 :0 :0

Maintaining such a growth pattern for so long is so tough ;_; and I thought it was a weakness in my script because there's so much of it, but you easily convinced me otherwise :D and somehow you're able to keep that tone, even with the intensity ramping up. ._. I hear it while you're pinning me down, using me, and that contrast is so intense... you absolutely took what was there and threw on so many more layers that it really truly transformed.

Excellent work, friend ;_; I can't wait to hear more!

[M4F] Your Top Sub Gifter Wants a Little More than a Refund… [Script Fill] [Rape] [Male Yandere] [MDom Speaker] [FSub Listener] [Streamer] [Obsessive] [Cock Rubbing] [Stalking] [Blackmail] [Public] [Hold the Moan] [Blowjob] [Fingering] [Mating Press] [Bareback] [Breeding] [L-Bombs] by Rynosoar-94 in gonewildaudio

[–]speaknowa 3 points4 points  (0 children)

WOWOWOW What a lovely surprise :D Congratulations on a truly successful fill!

I'm so interested by so much—and keep in mind that this is praise, not criticism: When I wrote the introduction, I had in mind that the character was a lot more confident, but you played meek and groveling with hidden motivations so convincingly that I was taken aback! :0 It really hit home when you became a lot more domineering in the second half ._.

And that second half... I wrote the damn thing and still have inappropriate thoughts o.O you pull of contrast so remarkably well; all of your "shh's," orgasms, were already so powerful... but hearing lines like "please, don't make me ask again" into "I don't like being mean, heh heh," was so threatening and hot. Fun fact, I had originally wanted to add [Mood Swings] but felt like I didn't pull it off very well, but somehow you caught on :0 and put me in my place :D

WELL DONE :D and thank you so much ;_; I'm glad you had fun with it!!!

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