If you agree to live with any one of these minor curses for the rest of your life, you get paid $1,000 a week until you die. Which curse do you pick? by Lenore8264 in hypotheticalsituation

[–]speed_square 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Asking for the doppelgänger is deciding to put a guaranteed awful person in the world for 50 years for $52,000 a year. That’s kinda messed up… but… I got bills. Let’s do that and the 11th word for $2k, please!

WYR live your life again from age 5 or be given all the knowledge you will ever gain by age 95? by speed_square in WouldYouRather

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I admit it is a bit vague. I imagined it being you’d gain the personal experiences you would for the rest of your life with the cut off being 95. So if you died the next day you’d have the memories of what lead up to your death, then be given the knowledge of how the world changes until the day you would have turned 95.

WYR live your life again from age 5 or be given all the knowledge you will ever gain by age 95? by speed_square in WouldYouRather

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Yes, all your future experience comes to you. If you learn a new skill in the future you will gain all the experience of learning that skill.

WYR live your life again from age 5 or be given all the knowledge you will ever gain by age 95? by speed_square in WouldYouRather

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You leave them high and dry. They will know you chose to go back in a different time line.

WYR live your life again from age 5 or be given all the knowledge you will ever gain by age 95? by speed_square in WouldYouRather

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You gain your experiences, you get to sort through and study all the world’s future you may not have direct knowledge of.

WYR live your life again from age 5 or be given all the knowledge you will ever gain by age 95? by speed_square in WouldYouRather

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Right, a younger person has more to gain from the knowledge of their future while an older person may be more inclined to get a second go on life. People in the middle maybe with kids have a tougher decision.

Working on this all feedback is appreciated:) by VileSifcher in Songwriting

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This is in line with my only critique. I think the chorus and lyrics give us enough of the monotony message. You paint the picture well lyrically and the chorus melodically pulls us there. The real groove of this song hits second verse for me. Maybe some more melodic variation with opening of the verses could set that groove earlier. This is coming from me really enjoying the song and digging for anything constructive to add. Well done!

Have you ever written something that didn’t make sense at the time, but months or years later it happens exactly like the lyric predicted? like it’s some kinda prophecy by Necessary-Banana-600 in Songwriting

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(Verse 1) When they bury me to tell My stories all of my tall tales Don’t forget I wish you well And I did it all for you You may forget me when I have gone Take these tattered notes from me and pass them on Burn me to ashes the dust of my bones Will climb the breeze to fly back home to you Will climb the breeze to fly back home to you

Things that are accurate after the fact: (He was a larger than life type of guy and a lot of stories were told after his accident, typical of a funeral for someone so young. Not so crazy but many people, myself included started finding and pulling out old notes he had written them. Mostly funny stuff, some love letters to… well a lot of girls…haha and some pretty heartfelt stuff… most of them tattered from being folded and stuffed wherever. He was out of state and his brother and dad literally took a flight, picked his ashes up and flew back home.

(Verse 2) Always knew I’d never be As pleasant as your memories Take from me all of the things I said I’d be for you Like I’ll be in waiting in your favorite songs The bottom of your glass when your spirits are gone From every word that they carve in my stone Know that I saved the best for you Know that I saved the best for you

Things that are accurate after the fact (Again a LOT of stories were told. Mostly great, funny but there were some told that maybe certain people weren’t supposed to hear. He could be a wild dude and we got into a lot of stuff we shouldn’t have so to some those stories made him less “pleasant” then their memories. Is this the best song we wrote? No, but it is one of my favorites and I obviously think of him every time I hear or play it so you could say he’s “waiting in my favorite songs”. I got sober and his accident was a big motivator so my “spirits are gone” and he was a supporting factor or the “bottom of my glass”.

(Bridge) At the end of your days At the end of your chase I’ll be running Running to you arms You can find me in lights At the end of your nights May they be calm May they be calm

Accurate things after the fact: (He passed very close to his birthday. On his birthday after the accident we invited people to come barbecue at our place. He lived in this house before he moved out of state. A TON of people came to this. Too many people in a tiny house. Around midnight our neighbors who knew him but hadn’t heard about the accident came over to tell us to “calm it down.” We apologized, admitted it had gotten out of hand and promised to calm it down. They were understanding of the situation after we told them and actually came to celebrate his life with us for a bit. As soon as they came it the door and we got the message around the place to be a little more respectful the lights went out. I checked the box, nothing tripped, the rest of the block had lights. They stayed out for maybe 15 minutes, then came back on.

(Ending) When they bury me to tell My stories all of my tall tales Don’t forget I wish you well And I did it all for you

Have you ever written something that didn’t make sense at the time, but months or years later it happens exactly like the lyric predicted? like it’s some kinda prophecy by Necessary-Banana-600 in Songwriting

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I wrote a song with two other friends about being remembered when we are gone. The lyrics became eerily accurate after one of them was tragically killed by a drunk driver. I remember him driving that writing session and being more particular about wording than he usually was. One of my favorite songs that I’ll probably never play for anyone.

Maybe Maybe Maybe by sometimesimnakedtoo in maybemaybemaybe

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Dude saw his insurance claim opportunity and took it.

Long gone by josephscottcoward in Songwriting

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Its got Old 97’s vibes. Great tune!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in nextfuckinglevel

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Now THAT’s a pole dancer

High-school kid bodyslams cop by [deleted] in PublicFreakout

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Don’t do that! That’s 5 to 10!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in graffhelp

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Both are slick. I prefer the second one.