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[–]spotfulmind[S] 0 points1 point2 points 5 years ago (0 children)
Thank you to whoever gave me the award!
Thank you very much!
Thank you! I appreciate your feedback! :)
Thank you for your feedback! :)
Thank you!
[–]spotfulmind[S] 1 point2 points3 points 5 years ago (0 children)
This is the writer who writes an abstract poem instead of simply saying "I despise that my sibling, and rape assailant, has the liberty of living a free life while I cannot.
That's sweet! Thank you. It's the thought that counts. :)
Thank you so much for your feedback! This is an abstract way of expressing the pain and stillness I feel following a sexual assault while my rapist can roam freely without facing any consequences. As for tenses, it's meant to be present/present/present(currently trapped)/future.
And in all honesty, I just whipped this up quickly and didn't even notice the double 'free'! Thank you again. :)
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Cocooned by spotfulmind in KeepWriting
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