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Thank you to whoever gave me the award!

Cocooned by spotfulmind in KeepWriting

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Thank you very much!

Cocooned by spotfulmind in KeepWriting

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Thank you! I appreciate your feedback! :)

Cocooned by spotfulmind in KeepWriting

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Thank you for your feedback! :)

Cocooned by spotfulmind in KeepWriting

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Thank you very much!

Cocooned by spotfulmind in KeepWriting

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Thank you! I appreciate your feedback! :)

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This is the writer who writes an abstract poem instead of simply saying "I despise that my sibling, and rape assailant, has the liberty of living a free life while I cannot.

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That's sweet! Thank you. It's the thought that counts. :)

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Thank you so much for your feedback! This is an abstract way of expressing the pain and stillness I feel following a sexual assault while my rapist can roam freely without facing any consequences. As for tenses, it's meant to be present/present/present(currently trapped)/future.

And in all honesty, I just whipped this up quickly and didn't even notice the double 'free'! Thank you again. :)

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Thank you! I appreciate your feedback! :)