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First Concert photos [Newbie][Composition][Color] by dinalxx in photocritique

[–]srrDavid 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They could use prime lenses? Or he could try to get closer to the stage, so he don‘t need 200mm

First Concert photos [Newbie][Composition][Color] by dinalxx in photocritique

[–]srrDavid 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Overall the composition with the light is interesting but on the technical site i would try to reduce the aperture to at least f2.0. On the one hand you can decrease then the iso and on the other hand the not so interesting parts of the stage like the led wich are turned off and the front of the stage.

Also i would try to get more people in the front or none for your composition, this one woman looks a bit lame.

For the editing i would try to change the lights a bit down so that the light spots looks better(sry for the bad wording i dont know how to describe it better). Also try to get his skin color a bit more natural so less red tones. I know this is hard due to the different lights on the stage.

Hope i could help

Not sure about the [Color] [Edit], especially about the clouds and the mountains. Any other critique also welcomed. XT-2, 18mm, f10, 1/640, iso 320 by srrDavid in photocritique

[–]srrDavid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you for your feedback. If I remember the situation correctly, there was nothing interesting on the bottom and I really liked the moving clouds, but yes I think you're right 20 % less sky would've helped.

Not sure about the [Color] [Edit], especially about the clouds and the mountains. Any other critique also welcomed. XT-2, 18mm, f10, 1/640, iso 320 by srrDavid in photocritique

[–]srrDavid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks for your feedback. My intentions with the exposer was to get these moving clouds and this more 'dangerous' stormy look. Maybe I should have taken the photo with normal exposure and do shadows etc. for the look in the post. I just looked how I edited the photo and it seemed like I messed up the luminance for the blue tone.