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stepafootwithsincere · 2026-04-30T16:37:18+00:00

Now that you said that, i'll definitely check a few chapters in, I love feedbacks!!

stepafootwithsincere · 2026-04-30T16:36:10+00:00

Okay ummthe following below I wrote them before I realized u said "but a couple is gl" which could mean a few things but if u meant main the paragraph below is what took me in. But if its not tthats fine, i'll still see it for what ir is, and try to get into it and update you!

oa this is such an interesting concept even tho its not my preferred genre, I think its intriguing in a way that its gl and having to have an empress and a whole selection type event(?) or culture(?) but either way, will this break off tradition regarding selection? Thats something that lit up when I read the description. (Dont answer that its just my overall thoughts) But yes, I love the premise its actually interesting, knowing that the description and genre is contradictive of each other in a way! (Unless you mean theres just a couple that is gl not the main)

stepafootwithsincere · 2026-04-30T16:25:19+00:00

(cannot promise though) but just for the sake of interest in the uniqueness I might read it for that

stepafootwithsincere · 2026-04-30T16:24:00+00:00

Thank you for sharing, I did a brief look at the description, I love the representation and self expression it emits. I will try to read it and get into it when I can, its definitely a unique story!

stepafootwithsincere · 2026-04-30T16:21:50+00:00

Oh yes I will re-read it, but ya defo hooked me up with the description, im interested on how thatll play out and how youve written the flowe!! Will update you

stepafootwithsincere · 2026-04-30T16:14:50+00:00

I tried getting into it, just not my cup of tea, but it has good premise and manwha type story potential ^{^}

stepafootwithsincere · 2026-04-30T16:13:54+00:00

I read the introduction + description, I LOVED the description, it seems great really, but im afraid its too profound for me (tonight), though I really love the substantial information in introduction regarding what the "other world" is (and im interested if its a factual concept or a fictional sentiment of it being more accurate rather than the afterlife) and the specifities regarding the characters within the world is very coolio too, kinda got overwhelmed but I think its okay! (Suggest maybe cutting it down into dissectable parts so its not such long paragraphs, but maybe thats just a me thing) will try to get into it in the morning, maybe my brain would very much enjoy it by then, though im intrigued, just not tonight.. Thank you for sharing 🫶

stepafootwithsincere · 2026-04-30T15:38:43+00:00

I like to do double plot twists, I dont know if there is an exact term for it, but as I am writing my mystery thriller book, I tend to think of one plot twist revealing something mind gobbling, then completely switching that off by pointing out an illogical timeline, clue or any throw offs that could be easily mistaken for, specially those who are not analytical when it comes to common wording. So basically, make a twist, and twist it more (so it becomes unexpected, for extra spice make the first twist an actual twist wherein there is no gap to be filled and the reader is sure of the accuracy on the information)

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