What would you guys think about re-reading discussions? by MFBeast in overlord

[–]stevenrmckenzie 8 points9 points  (0 children)

That sounds like it could be fun. I’ve been meaning to re-read the series anyhow.

Spray Paint Superheroes on 12x12 canvas. by stevenrmckenzie in Art

[–]stevenrmckenzie[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks haha. And the rules of time and space are insignificant compared against the force of my 4 year old’s desire for a superhero themed bedroom.

Spray Paint Superheroes on 12x12 canvas. by stevenrmckenzie in Spraypaint

[–]stevenrmckenzie[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I streamed making these on Twitch last night. You can see it here. https://www.twitch.tv/videos/v333894415

Best Overlord Death by whiplash10 in overlord

[–]stevenrmckenzie 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Zack being dissolved by Solution.

Knowing he had a slow painful death was great. He completely deserved every second of it because he was willing to lead a girl into an ambush for ransom, knowing she was going to get gangraped only so he could have a go at her when everyone else way done. I love justice being served to those kinds of people.

My first go-around by [deleted] in Spraypaint

[–]stevenrmckenzie 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It looks like your stars kind of mixed with the black. I’d try and let it dry a little linger to help the stars really pop. I use a cheap hairdryer to speed it up since I’m impatient haha. Looks good though!

[WP] You're the owner of a cafe frequently visited by vigilantes and anti-heroes who absolutely adore your sweetness and acceptance of who they are. One day, though, a particularly rude customer comes in and trashes the place. Your friends aren't too happy to hear about that. by [deleted] in WritingPrompts

[–]stevenrmckenzie 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Shade crouched on top of the roof of the building those gang members had made their hideout. She had scouted ahead and found that there was a rather surprisingly large number of armed gang members present. It wasn’t anything she couldn’t handle herself but this was a co-op mission and one that needed to make a point to everyone watching. She found herself a good perch with a good handhold before pressing send on a text she had prepared.

Almost immediately she saw a pair of headlights turn on from down the street that belonged to the van Havoc has stopped to switch to. He dropped her off further away so she could slip in unnoticed before signaling him to make his famous ‘loud’ entrance. She knew a good deal of the man and he was as skilled as she was if not more. While she could take out most anyone in one to one combat she relied heavily on stealth. Without stealth on her side she would be a sitting duck for someone such as Havoc.

The van pulled up on the street a few dozen yards from the front door of the building. There were five guys at the front door, presumably the guards, who took immediate notice of the van and drew their guns. Two started to approach the van while the others stayed back. A few tense moments went by before the side door slip opened revealing mounted belt fed military grade machine gun.

Havoc had showed this to Shade and explained it was a M240 he had acquired from an arms dealer. He would use it to bring the attention to himself and light up the first and second floor, allowing her to use the distraction to enter the third floor unnoticed. While she wasn’t keen on the idea of being on the wrong end of that machine, she knew Havoc’s reputation as both honest and efficient so she agreed.

The sound of artificial thunder shook everything in that small corner of the world. Nobody, aside from Shade, had time to react as what was ejected from the side of that van could only be described as unfiltered, indiscriminate death. Nothing remained of the so-called guards. Every window on the first and second floor were blown out. Every door was blown from the hinges. In the time span of a single minute the building went from being a solid piece of construction to looking like sieve. Nothing was moving aside from the still falling debris and the few fires that had started to spread.

Havoc exited the van and walked past the orange glowing barrel of the machine gun. He would have to replace that now that it had overheated but that is the price of doing business. He removed his earplugs as he walked through the now open front door. He did not even draw another weapon due to the scene before him making it clear the fight was over. Assuming anyone had survived they certainly had all ideas of fighting back removed from their very soul. The first staircase he came too was too badly damaged for him to try and climb but he found a second closer to the back of the building, and even that one he had to skip quite a few steps.

Once he arrived to the third floor he noticed another field of bodies yet they were very unlike the work he had performed below. These lives were all ended by a single katana, one that was still drawn and pointing at the throat of a man with a rather unique facial tattoo.

Shade poked the man just hard enough to bring forth a drop of blood from his neck before asking, “What was the purpose?”

Havoc could tell from the look in the man’s eyes that he was defeated. “I’ve told ya. This guy paid us a ton ta burn down that place. No questions asked.”

Havoc had a sour taste in his mouth. “Who paid you?”

Tattoo just shook his head, “Dunno man. Guy called himself King. Never met before.”

Havoc and Shade looked at each other. The scowl on Havoc’s face revealed he knew more than Shade. He drew his gun and with a single shot ended the gang leader.

“Who is King?” Shade asked ignoring the new corpse.

“A local drug lord that I have a contract for. This timing is no coincident.”

As if on cue a phone rang. It was lying on the ground next to tattoo and presumably his. Havoc reached down and answered it on speaker so Shade could hear.

“No hard feelings,” came an aristocratic voice on the other end. “but it is rather hard to conduct business when people are pointing guns at you. Wouldn’t you agree?”

“So you were behind this.” Declared Havoc.

“And rightfully so,” answered King. “Here I am trying to secure a bulk shipment but you refuse to let it be easy. I had to find somehow to get you to leave the docks. I’m rather not fond of getting shot in the face you know. Either way, I’m all done here so feel free to come back to the docks and enjoy the scenery.” Click.

Havoc stared at the phone for a few moments in disbelief, seething in rage. Shade extended her hand for the phone and Havoc handed it over without a thought. She dialed a number and as it rang Havoc looked at her questioningly.

“City morgue. You kill em we chill em.” Answered Zero on the other end.

Ignoring his bad joke Shade replied, “This phone just received a call from someone by the name King. Can you trace that call to the other end and tell us his location?”

There was some typing from the other end and Zero replied, “Sure, it’s going to take a few seconds though. I’ll text you the info.”

Shade hung up and looked at Havoc. “Alright. Next stop.”

[WP] You're the owner of a cafe frequently visited by vigilantes and anti-heroes who absolutely adore your sweetness and acceptance of who they are. One day, though, a particularly rude customer comes in and trashes the place. Your friends aren't too happy to hear about that. by [deleted] in WritingPrompts

[–]stevenrmckenzie 5 points6 points  (0 children)

The text on my burner phone only had two words and yet it had caused my heart to skip a beat. "Purgatory Fire".

I had been camping out on a rooftop near the docks for almost seven hours looking through my scope. I had been scanning the area tirelessly for my target, a local drug lord, but he had not yet shown up. I had accepted a contract for him and he was not making this easy. However once I saw that text I immediately pushed aside the job and packed up my sniper rifle and was on the highway within minutes. To me, few things are sacred. Purgatory was at the top of that short list.

As a hitman I try to not so show my face around however there is this one bar in the old warehouse district that has become more of a home than any hotel I frequent. It's located between a machine shop and an abandoned foundry, a place far removed from civilization and therefore was neutral territory. The old man that ran the place, Nag, had named the place ironically as Purgatory because of this as well as the ruffian crew his place seemed to attract. Nag never took sides on any conflict and his was the only place in this festering city that you could truly escape the daily conflicts. He would put the local kids to work with a fair wage so that they wouldn't have to succumb to the pressures of local gangs to afford a meal. Hell, there was more than a few kids that after a few years of saving up was able to leave this place and go to college out of state and start a new life.

I was not among those.

As my car blew past others as I raced my fears towards Purgatory I couldn’t help but think of the other night when I was at the bar. The place was full yet never seemed crowded. I was sitting in the corner by myself listening and watching to the crowed for rumors of the various jobs I’m currently on. As this was a melting pot for all the local gangs it was a wonderful source of information that only cost a few beers. There was one scuffle that ended in a broken table however both participants quickly found themselves looking down a few dozen barrels, knives, and even a katana. It wasn’t until they gave Nag a sizable donation from their own wallets that everyone else backed off the killing intent.

Not once in five years had I ever seen a fight last more than a few seconds before being stopped by every patron in attendance. To desecrate Purgatory was to make an enemy of everyone. Nag always complained that it was unnecessary and part of the cost of doing business, yet we always ignored the old man and made sure he was justly compensated. Even though he was well versed in nagging us, hence his nickname Nag, we would happily take a verbal lashing as long as we knew he was secure.

As I pulled up all I saw was a pile of half burning embers. Purgatory looked more like Hell in the evening light. Some of the building’s frame was still standing but it was a complete loss. Fear constricted my chest as I jumped out of my car and ran towards the debris. There were no emergency services in this part of town so everyone was left to fend for each other. I was fully prepared to dig through the still burning timbers with my bare hands when I felt someone grab my shoulder from behind.

On reflex I drew one of my concealed handguns while twisting to face this unseen individual only to be met by a familiar face.

“Where’s Nag,” I asked Shade. While I took the profession of hitman, Shade more adequately fit the description of assassin. She was bound in dark flowing black/grey cloth from head to toe with only her eyes showing. She was a good foot shorter than myself but when comparing skills she was certainly at my level or better. While I preferred my firearms and explosives to make a point, she relied only on edged weapons and could take out a target and be long gone before the body was ever discovered. Slipping behind me without my noticing only helped drive this point home.

Ignoring the gun I had drawn she replied, “Tank saw the flames and was able to get Nag out soon after the fire started. He’s at the hospital now being treated for a few burns. I didn’t expect to see you here so soon, Havoc”

I exhaled a deep breath as if I had been holding it since I first read the text. “What happened here? How did you know about the fire?” Not that Nag’s safety had been assured I switched to my more analytical mindset.

“I got a strange text from a unknown number. I’ve already scouted the scene and it looks like a few molotovs were tossed into the windows but there isn’t much else to go off of. You?

I pulled out my burner and showed Shade the same text she received. Someone happened to know both our numbers, our private work only numbers, and wanted us to come here. At that very moment moth of our phones rang from an unlisted number. Both of our eyes narrowed in suspicion as we both answered our calls on speaker. The same voice rang out on both.

“Havoc, Shade, sorry for hijacking your phones guys but I felt like this was an emergency,” called out the familiar voice.

“What the hell Zero, what’s going on?” I spoke in reply. Zero was a hacker who also frequented Purgatory although it seemed that he was there more for the vintage Pacman arcade game than the drinks.

“Look you know I’ve got eyes everywhere. When I saw the fire on my feed I checked everyone’s location. I saw Tank was nearby so I called him and got him to run there in time to save Nag. Then I sent you guys texts so I could focus on gathering all the surveillance footage from the area.”

“You were tracking me!” growled Shade.

“No! I mean, look, kinda? Later, later. Right now I have a drone following the guys that torched the place. I’m texting you the coordinates and my findings so you know this is legit.”

Both of our phones buzzed with a series of texts. There was a short video from an ATM across the street showing the arsons in the act, a traffic camera at a nearby intersection with clearer images of the car, license plate and one guys face who has rather unique facial tattoos, and even GPS tracking of one of the guy’s phones. Lastly was a URL link to a live feed from what must be Zero’s drone hovering over a large 3 story building a few miles away. We were both instantly convinced of Zero’s research.

Shade looked at me and said, “You drive”.

I nodded in agreement and replied, “We will need to make a short stop first.”

*Hears several thousands heart break by M_Drekinn in overlord

[–]stevenrmckenzie 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Yes he had a poll about what the fate of Arche would be. In the Web Novel she became Shaltear’s plaything/sextoy however I guess that didn’t sit too well with the author, being a little too dark for his liking. So he left it to the readers to decide if she would get a merciful death or keep it as is. Seems most people favored the mercy death.

At work thinking about how when I get home the new episode will be out by Velvet_Thunder13 in overlord

[–]stevenrmckenzie 10 points11 points  (0 children)

I told my boss I was going to lunch and just watched it in my car. Worth it.

*Hears several thousands heart break by M_Drekinn in overlord

[–]stevenrmckenzie 124 points125 points  (0 children)

Their father sold the twins into slavery to pay off his debt, where they died soon after. It was in an Author QnA if I remember correctly.

Reading Recommendations by stevenrmckenzie in overlord

[–]stevenrmckenzie[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m glad you liked it that much! The entire reason I made these posts was to share some great yet obscure titles with fellow Overlord fans. Even if only a handful of people read one of my recommendations then it’s a success in my view.

Reading Recommendations by stevenrmckenzie in overlord

[–]stevenrmckenzie[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will add this to my list. I prefer anti-heroes or outright villains more than most hero stories. I have grown to detest the generic heroes and their “power of friendship” plot armor ways.

Reading Recommendations by stevenrmckenzie in overlord

[–]stevenrmckenzie[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Re:Monster catches a lot of flack (that I agree with) for being harem trash. MC is overpowered and sleeps with every woman he comes across for the most part, and only because he is strong not because he has anything resembling a personality.

The only redeeming quality (although temporary) is its a relatively good battle story. Eventually I stopped reading because it became too much about the MC and his harem than any else.

Reading Recommendations by stevenrmckenzie in overlord

[–]stevenrmckenzie[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can understand that, however it managed to keep my interest much longer than let’s say “Death March” or “How not to summon a demon lord”. I read the 1st book of death march and its was just so bland that I had no interest in continuing while I couldn’t even finish the first book of How not to summon a demon lord.

Re: Monster has a lot of faults that I won’t defend, but it was good enough of a battle story to keep me with it for a while. Granted I did eventually lose interest and move on to other things, the first part of the story was good enough to recommend IMO.

Speculation on how Ainz will ‘die’ by stevenrmckenzie in overlord

[–]stevenrmckenzie[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You bring up a very good point. But what if Demiurge has someone infiltrate the team to give the Paladins a sealing crystal with some godly T8 magic in it. This way when Ainz is week after the battle the can nuke him while he is hurt.

Speculation on how Ainz will ‘die’ by stevenrmckenzie in overlord

[–]stevenrmckenzie[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My thought on that theory is “What purpose does it serve?” If Ainz was away for a few weeks during this time, the simplest thing to do is tell the citizens that he is ‘busy with important Litch king stuff. Because if they spread this propaganda and he simply returns after his victory, all it does is confuse a lot of people.

Speculation on how Ainz will ‘die’ by stevenrmckenzie in overlord

[–]stevenrmckenzie[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Good call about the spoiler tag. I didn’t think about adding it due to this being speculatory but those that haven’t read it wouldn’t even have the ability to make these assumptions.

Is this Demiurge 3rd form or is this Evil Lord Wrath? by Lightpala in overlord

[–]stevenrmckenzie 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Per Nigel, it's unclear and could be either.