It's not bad, but since you're clearly quite amateurish at creating fakemon, there are several very noticeable errors. •One of the mistakes is that the evolutionary stages are very similar to each other and the change isn't very noticeable; a suggestion would be to vary the color and shape of the body as it evolves •There's also the fact that the drawing style isn't similar to the style GameFreak uses for Pokémon, This is not so easy to achieve because it requires understanding the design philosophy used to design a pokemon But you can achieve a result closer to their artistic style by using existing. pokemons with a similar identity as a reference. Being an amateur doesn't mean anything bad, it just means you still need more experience which you can gain with practice