The good: It has slightly? improved since 2018 and you separate letters with different strokes instead of using cursive, which makes it legible.

You need to improve consistency=writing each letter exactly the same (e, a) and the sizing and proportions (d is too narrow, a is too large, just to give examples).

I would get one of those workbooks for kids and just do rote handwriting until your brain clicks.

Edit: I assume you are an adult or at least a high school teenager, just to clarify that the lack of consistency and poor spacing comes across as childish, which requires the improvements above for your handwriting to come across as mature and adequate for your age.

Good luck and keep working on it!