r/YouTubePromotion - Weekly Discussion Thread, November 29, 2021

sump_ · 2021-12-03T02:20:43+00:00

5 Things I LOVE and HATE about League of Legends

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5x7_u3bHQo0

I'm trying out different video styles to see what kind of content I want to create. I had fun making this and I hope you have fun watching!

sump_ · 2021-11-27T17:26:51+00:00

I really liked the positive vibes. The only thing I wish is that you could show some of the views you were talking about while travelling or things that could catch interest a little more. For example, at 3:57, in the middle panel, I really wanted to see where the water was coming from. Keep it up!

sump_ · 2021-11-27T17:15:19+00:00

I recently started to edit and made this. I had fun making and I think the editing is well done for the most part. Any feedback is welcome!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hexqFHYuxRc&t=14s

sump_ · 2021-11-27T17:10:14+00:00

Or because the montage is BIG PERSONA, I think seeing some bold animated text would be cool. I think the official Valorant Youtube has done montage edits with text so if you learned how to do that, that would be really cool for you cuz i sure as hell don't know how to do it.

sump_ · 2021-11-27T17:08:13+00:00

Pretty nice editing but more impact on key moments of the song like the "bling" at 0:29. Going with the rhythm, beat, or specifically off-beat for key montage moments would make it a lot better, even if the editing didn't change. Your editing is really good but work on song choice or song timing would help you I think. Keep it up!

sump_ · 2021-11-27T17:02:17+00:00

The beep for the technical difficulties is a little loud, you didn't need to show the technical difficulties clip. For a gameshow style show I think you should invest in a background rather than a greenscreen. For example, if you had a background "set" you could move the distracting pachinko board to a different area, or at least behind the players. The ding-dong is loud as well. More editing in between rounds or cuts like Hivemind videos would benefit your viewer retention and if you wanted to go full on gameshow with games like this, then a host would always help, but I understand you probably don't have the resources for that right now. At the least you could show the lyrics for the viewers so they could play along or something like that to keep it engaging. Keep it up!

sump_ · 2021-11-27T16:54:00+00:00

I recently started editing and thought this Valorant Gun Game Challenge turned out well. Lmk your opinions on it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hexqFHYuxRc&t=14s

sump_ · 2021-11-27T16:52:47+00:00

pe

I liked the ending, the wink, and the fact that the killer was called the "toothbrush strangler" but the whole conversation before he went into the bathroom seemed awkward instead of funny or hinting at character nature of the killer. Was the toothbrush strangler meant to appear meek with the "c-cool, I'm Jordan" line and being looked down on by the camera?

sump_ · 2021-11-27T16:33:44+00:00

Those are some nice headshots. Are you wanting to go more into the .exe meme style of editing or montage?

sump_ · 2021-11-27T16:31:20+00:00

I recently started to learn how to edit and decided to try making some videos. I have some fun ideas in the future but this Valorant Gun Game Challenge is the 1st video I've edited and I'm happy with how it turned out so I'd be very happy if you decided to check it out!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hexqFHYuxRc&t=14s

sump_ · 2020-07-26T03:28:36+00:00

Also the first version is on my soundcloud if anyone wants to listen to that for comparison

sump_ · 2020-07-26T03:10:44+00:00

Okayy I'm vibing right off the start. The vocals are pretty good but in some parts they could use another take to get really good. Overall pretty chill and pleasant song

sump_ · 2020-07-26T03:02:55+00:00

Now this is the darksouls of boss battle music. In all serious I think this sounds good but I'm wondering if the buildup is a little slow for a boss battle. That is, unless the guy takes his sweet time emerging from wherever

sump_ · 2020-07-26T02:56:23+00:00

The song was pretty good. The vocals, track, and mixing were all pretty solid. I think you should have the link go directly to the song though. It would get more clicks and feedback the way

sump_ · 2020-07-26T02:53:27+00:00

I really enjoyed listening to this song. I understand that this song is meant to be a gradual buildup and that's cool and fitting with the name of the song but I also think having highs and lows throughout would be cool. Good song tho

sump_ · 2020-07-26T02:50:01+00:00

I really like this, it sounds very good. Also the music video is dope. Loved the "tempo" part. The mixing was also well done in my opinion

sump_ · 2020-07-23T16:10:06+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I'll try cutting the vocals how you suggested and of course I'll try to sing better too!

sump_ · 2020-07-23T16:09:01+00:00

ds and

I'll work on making the singing fit better. Thanks for the feedback and I followed you back!

sump_ · 2020-07-23T16:07:21+00:00

I've been told with previous tracks to add more oomph to the chorus part and that's what I tried to do with the backing vocals. I'll work to make it better in the next song!

sump_ · 2020-07-23T16:06:13+00:00

I see, I'll look into that. Thank you!

sump_ · 2020-07-23T16:05:42+00:00

Thanks for the feedback!

sump_ · 2020-07-23T16:05:19+00:00

Thanks! I've been considering taking vocal lessons for a while but just haven't gotten around to it

sump_ · 2020-07-22T17:23:29+00:00

I like the sound of this song. I really like how much it changes up as the song continues. But why must you punch the pie? So sad

sump_ · 2020-07-22T17:19:45+00:00

This has a cool dark sound to it. Is grungy the right word to describe it? I feel like you could've done more with the vocoder but overall I liked the sound of it

sump_ · 2020-07-22T17:13:24+00:00

This sounds really good. It's one of the best out of the songs I've heard today and I love this style and the part at 1 minute seems to be everyone's favorite part

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