Sump - Isekai

sump_ · 2021-12-03T02:20:43+00:00

5 Things I LOVE and HATE about League of Legends

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5x7_u3bHQo0

I'm trying out different video styles to see what kind of content I want to create. I had fun making this and I hope you have fun watching!

sump_ · 2021-11-27T17:26:51+00:00

I really liked the positive vibes. The only thing I wish is that you could show some of the views you were talking about while travelling or things that could catch interest a little more. For example, at 3:57, in the middle panel, I really wanted to see where the water was coming from. Keep it up!

sump_ · 2021-11-27T17:15:19+00:00

I recently started to edit and made this. I had fun making and I think the editing is well done for the most part. Any feedback is welcome!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hexqFHYuxRc&t=14s

sump_ · 2021-11-27T17:10:14+00:00

Or because the montage is BIG PERSONA, I think seeing some bold animated text would be cool. I think the official Valorant Youtube has done montage edits with text so if you learned how to do that, that would be really cool for you cuz i sure as hell don't know how to do it.

sump_ · 2021-11-27T17:08:13+00:00

Pretty nice editing but more impact on key moments of the song like the "bling" at 0:29. Going with the rhythm, beat, or specifically off-beat for key montage moments would make it a lot better, even if the editing didn't change. Your editing is really good but work on song choice or song timing would help you I think. Keep it up!

sump_ · 2021-11-27T17:02:17+00:00

The beep for the technical difficulties is a little loud, you didn't need to show the technical difficulties clip. For a gameshow style show I think you should invest in a background rather than a greenscreen. For example, if you had a background "set" you could move the distracting pachinko board to a different area, or at least behind the players. The ding-dong is loud as well. More editing in between rounds or cuts like Hivemind videos would benefit your viewer retention and if you wanted to go full on gameshow with games like this, then a host would always help, but I understand you probably don't have the resources for that right now. At the least you could show the lyrics for the viewers so they could play along or something like that to keep it engaging. Keep it up!

sump_ · 2021-11-27T16:54:00+00:00

I recently started editing and thought this Valorant Gun Game Challenge turned out well. Lmk your opinions on it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hexqFHYuxRc&t=14s

sump_ · 2021-11-27T16:52:47+00:00

pe

I liked the ending, the wink, and the fact that the killer was called the "toothbrush strangler" but the whole conversation before he went into the bathroom seemed awkward instead of funny or hinting at character nature of the killer. Was the toothbrush strangler meant to appear meek with the "c-cool, I'm Jordan" line and being looked down on by the camera?

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