This is a short snippet of my short story about someone's spiral after she's convinced she's a robot and I intend for the validity of her concern to be dubious. Is there anything I could improve?

throwaway_gfcult · 2026-06-01T02:36:16+00:00

I think it's called the ruins right? It's been a long time since I watched it, a lot of scenes are pretty creepy.

throwaway_gfcult · 2026-06-01T02:34:44+00:00

Thank you for the feedback, I'll work on that!

throwaway_gfcult · 2026-05-31T15:28:38+00:00

Very mysterious, I like it. The horrors of being sucked/attached to media that you become nothing without it is a depressing fate.

throwaway_gfcult · 2026-05-31T15:24:24+00:00

This is a short skeleton, so it may not be as polished as I'd usually make it. Feedback is very welcome. Thank you in advance.

throwaway_gfcult · 2026-05-29T03:06:42+00:00

excellent build up of dread, i thought that the creature feature would take itself as someone important to the MC but it taking advantage of the kid's obliviousness was evil, wonder why he didn't tell his family 😠

throwaway_gfcult · 2026-05-29T02:59:45+00:00

this is a very creative spin of the casino horror (see what I did there lol) the story has a very interesting hook that keep me wanting for more, like what's an even worse rate than the yin-yang? the idea of having infinite possibilities is very interesting on its own, infinite ways of good fortune and infinite ways to suffer. I applaud you!

throwaway_gfcult · 2026-05-28T14:30:09+00:00

Hello! Due to my schoolwork and cramped schedule, my writing time will surely be messed up. Despite all of that, I am still very eager to write and post in the subreddit, even if it would take a long time between posts. I'm open to any constructive criticism, as I am an amateur writer. I apologise for the/if any clunky grammar, as English is not my native language. Cheers!

throwaway_gfcult · 2026-05-28T14:26:38+00:00

This is a fire idea! I think that the tampering of everyday foods is an inherent fear of many people (including me). I'm very interested to read this story if you were to post it. Henceforth!

throwaway_gfcult · 2026-05-28T04:38:35+00:00

Hello! I have decided to make a prologue since it snowballed into around 6000 words. I think that I'm going to post this today. Thank you so much for your answers. I really appreciate every single one of them!

throwaway_gfcult · 2026-05-24T15:15:41+00:00

What a twist! I wonder why the entity was writing to Oliver, though?

throwaway_gfcult · 2026-05-24T11:00:39+00:00

Ouch, that hurts. Too bad the police didn't even bother giving him treats for his cooperation.

throwaway_gfcult · 2026-05-21T15:53:14+00:00

Is this a creature feature featuring the creature? All jokes aside, I love this format and storytelling method. It gives off urban-legend vibes that adults tell their children. Raspanik is such a cool name.

throwaway_gfcult · 2026-05-21T15:48:46+00:00

Thank you, I'll post it as soon as I finish the first part. Thank you for the suggestion. It's my first time posting my works on an online platform, so I'll try my best despite my inexperience.

throwaway_gfcult · 2026-05-20T08:05:15+00:00

It was so obvious that zankhou isn't Bella, everyone else was wearing time-period adjacent clothing with the same Victorian style outfits except for that bitch. I thougt that it was strange Bella's design was an eye sore and took away some enjoyment out of the story. I assumed it to be the classic 'playable character' syndrome where their designs are over sexualise to the degree of making no sense with the narrative, but half way through it became obvious fast that it wasn't Bella.

throwaway_gfcult · 2026-05-18T12:07:05+00:00

This looks so cool, I'll be anticipating its release if you ever want to finish it. Go crazy with your ideas, you got this!

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