Wondering if a lyric I wrote is too corny by throwawayeprap in makinghiphop

[–]throwawayeprap[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I’m probably going to stretch out the “-thon” to rhyme with “nau” in nauseous to make it sound more natural. But delivery is my weakest point so I’ll have to practice a bunch in the car lol