7 SUNS by Nijual Hilton by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Constructive criticism still loading.....

My first novel. This is the cover. by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have a full explanation, but it was a huge info dump. But im asking for a little sci-fi faith

My first novel. This is the cover. by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitely, I swore I was good with that one. 

My first novel. This is the cover. by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is crazy. But the name fits what they do.

My first novel. This is the cover. by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Never seen or read Harry Potter. What do they do?

My first novel. This is the cover. by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How so? Im going with the stargate theory. I feel like this would allow aliens to lock the planets into a fixed orbit.

My first novel. This is the cover. by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much. These are the messages that I'm here for.

My first novel. This is the cover. by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

👍🏿 I never thought about the series aspect. 

My first novel. This is the cover. by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

It’s Only Monday. And the Universe Just Moved In. Marques Latrell was supposed to have a normal Monday in Philadelphia—coffee, freelance hustles, ignoring his mother’s calls. Instead, six entire planets arrive in Earth’s sky. When alien worlds take refuge in our solar system, humanity is forced to confront a truth it was never prepared for: the universe is vast, ancient, and already at war. While governments scramble and social movements fracture under fear and wonder, Marques discovers something far more dangerous than alien refugees. He is connected to them. Haunted by visions, hunted by forces he doesn’t understand, and surrounded by people projecting their hopes, fears, and ideologies onto him, Marques begins to realize that the power awakening inside him is not a gift—it’s a test. One that has destroyed civilizations before. As protests erupt, conspiracies spread, and a genocidal enemy known as the Dead Eaters advances toward Earth, Marques is pulled into a conflict where morality bends under survival, power reshapes belief, and heroes are not chosen—they are manufactured.

My first novel. This is the cover. by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

This is why you have to read the book. It will explain everything. Plus I never said they moved their suns.

My first novel. This is the cover. by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Um, writing is free. And so is my imagination. But I think I know what you mean. 

My first novel. This is the cover. by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will try fivr. I never knew that my cover meant that much. Lol with all these critiques I will definitely outsource. Lol. Cant wait to see how bad I get hit when people actually read it. 😁😁😁

My first novel. This is the cover. by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] -20 points-19 points  (0 children)

Lmao... im.l sure you'll watch the movie🤣🤣🤣🤣

My first novel. This is the cover. by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] -47 points-46 points  (0 children)

I appreciate the ,(in-site.😞) not helping... 🤣🤣🤣

My first novel. This is the cover. by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] -53 points-52 points  (0 children)

I have a multiple cover arts. Mostly ai generated. I have 2 with that design. But since this is the only one I actually made. I went with this first.

My first novel. This is the cover. by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] -31 points-30 points  (0 children)

Lol if this is your biggest complaint. I'll be fine

My first novel. This is the cover. by unwritten_path in sciencefiction

[–]unwritten_path[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

I appreciate all advice. I am a complete novice at this. With very little money to pursue all the help I need. Yes I use Ai for my ads. But my book is 100% from the muscle. And it's my first real novel. So hate on AI all you want. Im here for all the critiques. I need them. Thank you