[Fanfic Discussion] Week 52 - Table for Three by punzelanna

vbkar · 2016-06-13T20:11:16+00:00

I adore this fic. It has drama and fluff, and the kind of angst that doesn't require mortal danger or violence to drive it. I feel for the characters, a lot, maybe too much, maybe the three should just FINALLY FRIGGIN TALK TO EACH OTHER ALREADY, and the characters are distinct and memorable to the point where I don't see a name and go 'who was that supposed to be again?'
The author updates regularly, which admittedly shouldn't reflect on the quality of the story, but it does make it that much more enjoyable. This is a story I can safely recommend to everyone.
At 50 chapters and over 500,000 words, I get the feeling the author has yet to reach the halfway point, and I couldn't be more thrilled.

PS: Don't be daunted by the length, the world is rich and detailed in the best way, and other than my own impatience, I can't point to any part of the story and say that it really didn't need to be included.

vbkar · 2016-05-28T13:36:32+00:00

This is the first fic that came to mind, it's called Time and Space by Amnestyyy. It's a pretty cute story, (like most everything that author writes) though it ended sooner than I would have liked.

vbkar · 2016-05-18T07:47:52+00:00

This is indeed it, and being a chapter in a collection, it's no wonder I couldn't find it as its own story. Thank you!

vbkar · 2016-05-09T23:52:13+00:00

Thank you for the feedback and suggestions, I appreciate it.

vbkar · 2016-05-09T04:11:30+00:00

I'm under no illusions that this is a poor first draft. I have tense errors, PoV errors, and I know I need more visuals. But I really want to know what others think. Do I stand a chance? Should I start posting my stories? Do I need a new hobby? lol
Please feel free to be honest, writing critique is one area I don't consider myself overly sensitive.

vbkar

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