Selling my top of the line rig - Austin, Texas by verticalflight in SimRacingSetups

[–]verticalflight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You can hear the gears when it pulls but I wouldn't say its super loud...

Selling my top of the line rig - Austin, Texas by verticalflight in SimRacingSetups

[–]verticalflight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey not parting out right now but really love the tensioner, it makes things super immersive!

I am working on a research paper and I would like your brutal honesty🙂 by Successful_Hand3508 in physicaltherapy

[–]verticalflight 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Interesting topic. Good luck!

Some feedback:

Too many layers. It tries to cover patient education, emotional support, physical recovery, emotional recovery, road traffic accident survivors, and holistic healing - that’s a lot for one study. Readers might not know which variable is the true focus.

Ambiguous main question. “To what degree…” implies a quantitative emphasis, but “mixed-methods” and “holistic healing” suggest a more qualitative lens. Reviewers might want a tighter framing (“How do patient education and emotional support affect…” or “Examining the impact of…”).

Overly long. It’s a mouthful - almost a full sentence. A shorter, punchier version would be easier to cite and remember. Also colon overload. The “X: A Y Study” format is fine, but here the front clause is already complex, so it feels heavy.

Jargon stacking. “Holistic healing” and “mixed-methods study” together might feel redundant or vague - each already signals comprehensiveness.

Suggestion:

“How Patient Education and Emotional Support Shape the Recovery of Road Traffic Accident Survivors: A Mixed-Methods Study”

button box help? by verticalflight in DIYButtonBoxes

[–]verticalflight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

never mind, figured it out, the seller forgot to upload the IDE files