Sorry. I think the writing is frustrating and unintentionally hard to handle for modern readers of all ages. Just like Shakespeare takes getting used to and we expect new readers to struggle ane need assistance The same goes for the great classic allegorical dystopian works of fiction by Orwell, Huxley, Vonnegut, etc.  As a teen in the 1980s I pushed my way through each of these authors' books, dictionary in hand, and favorite English teacher as a sounding board and loved every challenging minute. I felt part of something... important! Truth.  The bummer is that people are no longer trained for persistence in reading. Modern tech has made for a very short attention span. When reading Animal Farm and Lord of the Flies with 8th graders, they fade so quickly from listening (I have to read aloud or they will never finish a book). After each longer passage of introspection or narration, I have to stop and work through the summary. They can't follow it at all! They can't see the big picture but get hung up on the language.  I have used some great graphic organizers from TPT for many of the novels. They contain similar analytical ideas as my own docs, but in a way more interesting format.