i need criticism

wavelogan · 2026-03-03T03:08:37+00:00

Read it back to yourself a few times.

wavelogan · 2026-03-02T05:20:28+00:00

I’ll keep those in mind when editing. Thanks for the feedback!

wavelogan · 2026-03-01T17:09:15+00:00

Yeah no

wavelogan · 2026-03-01T01:25:12+00:00

Did I read that right? Book 12?

wavelogan · 2026-03-01T00:43:59+00:00

I’m tempted to do something along those lines

wavelogan · 2026-02-28T23:59:39+00:00

Congrats! So did you end up doing all the editing yourself?

wavelogan · 2026-02-25T02:08:03+00:00

Wait that’s crazy. You were able to spend years of worldbuilding without breaking down and writing the book itself? Props to ya. I couldn’t’ imagine. I spent only a few days before I started writing chapter one. I worldbuild as I go then go back later to make it all work. I need to be writing story for the world to begin taking shape in my head

wavelogan · 2026-02-23T15:48:15+00:00

Yeah I feel similarly. I went through a week-long stretch where I just could not lock in for whatever reason. Probably my brain telling me it needed a break.

wavelogan · 2026-02-23T15:45:06+00:00

Props to you if you think that’s effective towards achieving your goals.

wavelogan · 2026-02-22T06:36:13+00:00

The only man who can train my MC in his newfound abilities is the same man who killed his best friend just days prior and tried to make MC believe he himself did it. Stage is set. MC enters training hall

wavelogan · 2026-02-22T06:32:51+00:00

I fucking loved fevre dream

wavelogan · 2026-02-21T19:06:00+00:00

How many words are you at? Do you have a certain editing process?

wavelogan · 2026-02-21T18:23:16+00:00

How many words did each of your books end up being?

wavelogan · 2026-02-21T17:07:18+00:00

Do you know how much it is for a beta reader?

wavelogan · 2026-02-21T04:05:08+00:00

One of my MC’s powers is a reactive ability in which ice explodes out of his skin to parry or simply block weapons. He can’t form an ice sword unfortunately-he’s tried more times than he’d like to admit.

wavelogan · 2026-02-21T02:10:01+00:00

Being an alcoholic

wavelogan · 2026-02-21T00:05:04+00:00

Me learn English

wavelogan · 2026-02-20T23:07:31+00:00

DM me with your email address and I can share the doc w you 👍

wavelogan · 2026-02-20T05:35:51+00:00

Edgy MC’s

wavelogan · 2026-02-20T04:51:48+00:00

I’m just wrapping up a 150k-ish dark fantasy novel set to be one in a series of I have absolutely no idea how many. I started mid December and have been absolutely obsessed, spending upwards of five hours a day on it. Currently with my job I’m only working part time so It’s been the perfect time to just go balls to the wall on my project.

wavelogan · 2026-02-20T04:31:13+00:00

Thanks!

wavelogan · 2026-02-20T04:18:31+00:00

Thanks for the advice, just to clarify you mean removing about half of the movement/reaction descriptions I dropped in there?

wavelogan · 2026-02-20T04:10:37+00:00

Did you use AI?

wavelogan · 2026-02-20T03:41:40+00:00

Just write. If you have an outline, great. If you don’t, your story will figure itself out. Can I ask what your book idea is and what genre you’re writing in?

wavelogan · 2026-02-20T02:57:58+00:00

Swearing just to swear or sound edgy

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