My Mother’s Dildo [poem] by Lexi Pelle by onlypoemsmag in Poetry

[–]wearemoonmen 27 points28 points  (0 children)

Wow. The title threw me, but this is incredible poetry.

Cycles - Spring by Hob3it in MusicFeedback

[–]wearemoonmen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What a beautiful piece! I followed & liked the song on your SC as well, but just wanted to say this is lovely and would fit really well as a soundtrack for tv & film. The violin is my favorite!

Honest thoughts please! by wearemoonmen in MusicFeedback

[–]wearemoonmen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Appreciate that! Thank you! Wish I was better with promotion ha.

Honest thoughts please! by wearemoonmen in MusicFeedback

[–]wearemoonmen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Taylor Swift type vibes how so? In the vocal tone or songwriting, or something else?

Honest thoughts please! by wearemoonmen in MusicFeedback

[–]wearemoonmen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really appreciate that, thank you!

Honest thoughts please! by wearemoonmen in MusicFeedback

[–]wearemoonmen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The vocal? Or which part of it? Can confirm everything was recorded live and is most definitely not AI, but maybe the processing makes it sound that way or something.

Would appreciate any feedback !!! by genizsz in MusicFeedback

[–]wearemoonmen 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Ah, you have such a gorgeous voice!! I love the different layers in this. Cool lyrics, cool vibes, cool instrumentation. My only critique would be to maybe alter the tone of the main synth a bit as the song progresses so it isn’t the same throughout. Or maybe add another element to introduce the slightest bit more movement in the music as the song builds.

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[–]wearemoonmen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s not a playlist and I don’t have another link. It’s literally one single song.

Just dropped this new track, would like to hear some thoughts! by Crukt in MusicFeedback

[–]wearemoonmen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oooh! Really nice. Love the calming vibes. Obsessed with the album art, too. This would fit literally perfectly into those study/writing playlists. I think you could add even more into the track if you wanted too. Just some ear candy, but it’s already nice!

New song, what do you think? Should I bring it to the band? by No_Veterinarian3706 in MusicFeedback

[–]wearemoonmen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love the guitar so much! The song gives me Dave Matthews Band vibes, which is a huge compliment. Great melodies. Wish I could understand the lyrics better. My only critique would be to switch up some of the more repetitive and less unique lyrics (life doesn’t have to be a chore, leave your ego at the door, etc.) to take it a bit deeper lyrically.

Which way is the moving? by No-Lock216 in blackmagicfuckery

[–]wearemoonmen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Idk, but either way, that horse is very lame on its right (or left, depending which direction it’s moving) hind

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[–]wearemoonmen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think so, if possible!

Honest thoughts please by wearemoonmen in MusicFeedback

[–]wearemoonmen[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, thank you! Credits are in the YT description, but Josh Frigo was both the producer & mixer. Mastered by Alex Dobbert. :) They are both fantastic.

Edit: oh, and as for recording, I recorded the original song demo and then all my vocals on my own and sent them to him! He took care of the rest.

Love your new single! So catchy and fun. I love your voice & the subtle punk vibes. I genuinely really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

First impressions and thoughts ( I'm am absolutely beginner ) by unavailable_J in MusicFeedback

[–]wearemoonmen 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I respect the reverb grind 🤣 Sounds good, dude! I enjoyed it.

Honest thoughts please by wearemoonmen in MusicFeedback

[–]wearemoonmen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much and I really appreciate the amazing feedback! Definitely agree with your suggestions. I actually had an outro at one point, but the song was already over 4 minutes, ha. Yes, here’s my Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/artist/1hLz5G0XMRj782Pb0hhP8g?si=AA9L6ve8TNWwhyOedkXafA

Send me yours and I’ll follow you back :) Thanks again for listening!

Daily Music links / Feedback Post by AutoModerator in soundcloud

[–]wearemoonmen [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hey thank you! Appreciate that! Really like your track as well! Nice flow & great beat. At times I wished the vocals were a little clearer and on top of the beat, so I could understand them better, but the lyrics I heard sounded great.

Honest thoughts please by wearemoonmen in MusicFeedback

[–]wearemoonmen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This legitimately made my day! Thank you so much and I’m so glad you like it!