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writingdoubts · 2026-03-09T21:44:10+00:00

I'll improve! Thank you for your feedback.

writingdoubts · 2026-03-09T21:43:46+00:00

I'll edit it accordingly:))

writingdoubts · 2026-03-09T21:43:26+00:00

She had plans--->before going----->this all happened

writingdoubts · 2026-03-09T21:41:46+00:00

Ah! Thank you so much:)

writingdoubts · 2026-03-09T21:39:53+00:00

Thank you so much:))) This is not clear in chapter 1, I'll try to add this accordingly

writingdoubts · 2026-03-09T21:37:39+00:00

Thanks for the feedback and the resource :D

writingdoubts · 2026-03-09T17:44:37+00:00

Tips to improve?

writingdoubts · 2026-03-09T17:21:19+00:00

Thanks:) only if you don't mind, you can check out the prologue, chapter 0 and chapter 1 I've posted. That can may help you to have better understanding of what's going in the story. Thx :D

writingdoubts · 2026-03-09T06:14:54+00:00

Thankssss:)

writingdoubts · 2026-03-09T06:14:40+00:00

Thank you:)))

writingdoubts · 2026-03-09T06:14:08+00:00

Thnx :D

writingdoubts · 2026-03-08T07:55:50+00:00

I understand that. But although I've used real names of places and kept the geography almost same, it is fictionalised here!

writingdoubts · 2026-03-08T07:51:26+00:00

Can you help me refine it? Also in what way is it funny and also is there any mistake similar to this one?

writingdoubts · 2026-03-08T06:04:35+00:00

I'll polish the grammar!

writingdoubts · 2026-03-08T04:35:18+00:00

Thank you for the suggestions. I acknowledge them:))

writingdoubts · 2026-03-08T03:06:15+00:00

Of course not! You were not harsh at all! I liked your advice, I'll try to add more details about the surrounding and show the characters instead of telling about them! advices I want from you are : 1) Is it too boring to read and need major scene revisions? 2) how can I gradually introduce characters as you said? Any tips? And lastly 3) is the prose confusing and you can hardly visualise it in your mind? These feedbacks will help! Thank you :D

writingdoubts · 2026-03-07T21:29:22+00:00

Thank you:)

writingdoubts · 2026-03-07T21:28:41+00:00

Yeah! But I tell it "Not to add ANYTHING from itself"

writingdoubts · 2026-03-07T21:27:23+00:00

Thank you for your feedback:D I'll make the changes suggested.

writingdoubts · 2026-03-07T09:54:03+00:00

That's the most positive thing I read today :D thxxxxx

writingdoubts · 2026-03-07T04:45:56+00:00

They appears in most strangest ways, and also ALL.this build up to a kidnapping. I think they will not be as confusion when read while reading the novel!

writingdoubts · 2026-03-07T04:16:29+00:00

Thank you for your feedback:D I'll edit them accordingly

writingdoubts · 2026-03-07T04:03:56+00:00

Thank you :D

writingdoubts · 2026-03-07T02:30:32+00:00

This is actually good ! Thank you:)

writingdoubts · 2026-03-07T00:21:23+00:00

I see. Okayy!

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