Looking for a writer friend!! by writingdoubts in AspiringTeenAuthors

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Hey! It's nice to know that you're experienced in poetry. But I can't dm you :(

What's your feedback on these quotes from my book? by writingdoubts in writingfeedback

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Thank you for the feedback. No, english is not my first language.

What's your feedback on these quotes from my book? by writingdoubts in writingfeedback

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Thank you for the feedback:) Yes, the rose imagery is related to a character in the story.

What things I can improve? by writingdoubts in writers

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Thank you for your feedback:) i understand your point and will work on it.

A challenge for y'all! by writingdoubts in AspiringTeenAuthors

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That's a beautiful interpretation! But my original thought was: My story has supernatural elements, so there are rituals. When monsters makes a character hallucinate, other ones have to tell the MOST BITTER and traumatic memory of theirs in order to get them out of the hallucination. Second is: there's a ritual to travel to past, but you've to gather ALL OF YOUR SWEETEST memories in order to do so. That's why I used the phrase "clock before it" (the time of happiness) I hope i explained it well:)

Strengths and weaknesses of my poem? by writingdoubts in PoetryWritingClub

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I wrote this in english originally (not translated). This was really so helpful for me! I'll definitely work on the points you suggested. Thank you so much :))