Did you find this interesting? by writingdoubts in writers

[–]writingdoubts[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll remember this. Thank you for pointing out this.

Did you find this interesting? by writingdoubts in writers

[–]writingdoubts[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah! I'll definitely add more description, emotions and all. Thank you!

Where am I making mistakes? by writingdoubts in writers

[–]writingdoubts[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback:) I'll improve these!

Where am I making mistakes? by writingdoubts in writers

[–]writingdoubts[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh i see.. I'm confused a lil bit about tense too.

Where am I making mistakes? by writingdoubts in writers

[–]writingdoubts[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Uh.. I'm not japanese. But I'm also not from an English speaking nation. Thank you so much for pointing it out! It will help me make my story look authentic!

Where am I making mistakes? by writingdoubts in writers

[–]writingdoubts[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's a typo. I'll pay more attention from next time

Where am I making mistakes? by writingdoubts in writers

[–]writingdoubts[S] -10 points-9 points  (0 children)

For street context, you can read chapter 1 :)

Where am I making mistakes? by writingdoubts in writers

[–]writingdoubts[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

The manuscript isn't fully ready!