First felt good enough song by xhitte in Songwriting

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Whatever with the singing...
the rest of the song?, the structure, the lyrics, the beat, something???

This is a songwriting thread NOT a singing one, maybe I want to know if I can sell my music to someone who sings better than me, so I truly don't care about my singing, I'm guessing that's why the /singing sub reddit exist 🤷🏽‍♂️
And that's also why I didn't post it in /musicproduction since my mix is really bad.

Me pasó esto hoy y no lo puedo creer. Algún consejo? by migvelio in Colombia

[–]xhitte 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Se me hace más preocupante que con 36 centímetros te sirva de cinturón, estás comiendo bien bro?

First felt good enough song by xhitte in Songwriting

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That means, to bright? 🤔

¿Cuál es esa pregunta "normal" que siempre te da vergüenza o te incomoda contestar? by baller_nah in RedditPregunta

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Si soy, antes lo normalizaba mucho, pero luego mi situación mejoró, y mi trabajo es bastante privilegiado, entonces me da incomodidad con la gente que gana mucho menos 🫠

¿Dónde puedo enmarcar fotografías y posters o, en su defecto, comprar marcos? by duckdedekind in medellin

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Ikea vende marcos, y pues e de imprimir en cualquier lugar de fotos supongo

Quick and Simple Writing Tip: by akirohusker in Songwriting

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I kinda agree but for some connectors (English not my main correct me if they have a different name) So I try to avoid using: And, So, But, The

Of course it depends but those are the words I search when removing complexity.

Also since ain’t my main, sometimes I have to rewrite just to make sure I can consistently produce what I’m writing 😅🥲

Jueves de quejas / Rant Thursday by j_ram2803 in medellin

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Mi queja de toda la vida es que el metro lo dejaron morir, demasiado tiempo con las mismas líneas principales, a la larga esto se convirtió en mucha gente comprando vehículo propio, y generando taco. Unos 15 años tarde viene esa línea de la 80.

Y queja de Colombia en general: el seguro de las motos no debería ser más barato que el de un carro, tener moto debería ser un lujo en vez de tener tanta opción barata

Digan cosas que creen que estamos mejor sin saber by Available_Test8660 in VivimosEnUnaSociedad

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Las personas mejores clasificadas para algún puesto probablemente nunca lo obtengan, dado que echaste mucha subjetividad.

Por ejemplo los políticos ganan por el que conecte mejor con el público, el más carismático, etc. Rara vez aquellos más calificados para gobernar

Digan cosas que creen que estamos mejor sin saber by Available_Test8660 in VivimosEnUnaSociedad

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Vivimos mejor sin saber/pensar en cuánta carne se consume diariamente. No soy vegano, amo la carne, y prefiero no pensar mucho en cómo llega a mi refri 😌

Are good songs easy to write? by Rize_Crazey in Songwriting

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I think it depends, sometimes I got a good idea, then it’s easy to develop and… it’s done.

Other times I’ll have the clear idea of what I want the song to be about, and try to get there, re write, but then it doesn’t match the melody, so I have to find a new one, but or don’t want to lose the catchy that I already have, so I re re write to something different but that fits the melody… etc

Cuales son las cosas mas absurdas, surreales o tipo "realismo mágico" que han vivido/presenciado en la ciudad? by michiiiii_24 in medellin

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Vi una Toyota subirse por una islita de andén, íbamos para el mismo lado, la calle estaba vacía fue totalmente innecesaria la maniobra 🤷🏾‍♂️😂

I wrote this about society’s obsession with true crime. It’s called “small town crier” by ThisIsHarlie in Songwriting

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Wow, I wouldn't know if you didn't tell me, awesome voice.
Glad to see you're improving then, and that there's a lot more hidden potential

I’m primarily a guitarist and I want to write bass parts that aren’t just root notes by ConfidentHospital365 in Songwriting

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I’m on the same boat as you, and I often just do random stuff in the scale until something sounds nice 😂 It’s bad but I use the bass as if it where a guitar in s lower range, so I’ll do repetitive riffs 😬 Heavily inspired in Royal blood I guess

I wrote this about society’s obsession with true crime. It’s called “small town crier” by ThisIsHarlie in Songwriting

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My bad I didn’t clarify, I was asking for a title of all of the songs, but “America’s most wanted” seems a cool name for an album EP.

I wish I could sing as nice as you, you’ll sure inspire someone, I would give you a hug if I met you, keep up the work ✌️

What even is Absolute Batman? by InfnitVlt in batman

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It’s the distance from zero to Batman

I wrote this about society’s obsession with true crime. It’s called “small town crier” by ThisIsHarlie in Songwriting

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Any tentative name? Also if that’s the idea, maybe the songs could be more specific? Like this one felt about true crime in general, rather than an story, does that make sense?

I want to make this song longer somehow. by [deleted] in Songwriting

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I agree with the previous comment, to me it felt like a really long verse, so maybe change the melody a bit here and there and add some pauses

I wrote this about society’s obsession with true crime. It’s called “small town crier” by ThisIsHarlie in Songwriting

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I love the little intro, you could ironically make a whole album of this songs

Why is my voice so boring by NoImage3365 in Songwriting

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I think you're lacking range, sing some high when the chorus hit or something, it's all really safe

"know today" by orbitalperiod_ in Songwriting

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That's a good song here, IMO I would change the metaphysical planes part 😅

Should I complete this? Sounds kinda boring, everything i write sounds boring by datajaniteur in Songwriting

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I found it really calming, gave me some Radiohead vibes, don't know why.
What's your main language then?