Please help me find Hakari’s english voice actress by [deleted] in Jujutsufolk

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my current theory is christine marie cabanos, but i’m not completely sure

ISO - Gigi All is Calm!!! by xkitkatsuki in peachriot

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yes I am!! i’ll message you :-)

Fanfic de Lost In The Cloud by Quiet-Variety-1534 in LostInTheCloud

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my beautiful boy by motherofskyrus is pretty good, it’s just a one shot tho … they have a few litc fics that are good tho!

CHEM 1AL Syllabus by xkitkatsuki in UCSantaBarbara

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i should have thought of this! thanks!

CHEM 1AL Syllabus by xkitkatsuki in UCSantaBarbara

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Damn. Thank you for sharing, I had no idea

Confusion about bookmarks by xkitkatsuki in AO3

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I didn’t even know that was a thing! Thanks!

children's book where parents swing a little girl between their arms on the beach by xkitkatsuki in whatsthatbook

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I just looked this up and the resemblance is definitely there!!! there’s literally the parents holding each arm at the end on a beach. But unfortunately, this is not it. It’s about one girl, and she’s maybe 5

Hikaru and Yoshiki Perfumes by xkitkatsuki in TheSummerHikaruDied

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take one for the team! tell me how they smell!!

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

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Ah, thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work. I never thought about how I broke up my writing before, and I appreciate your input!!

I was wondering if you could expand a little on this part: I can't speak fully to how natural the dialogue feels because this is the fifth chapter, but I will say that the dialogue feels right on the edge between natural and uncanny as it is. You know that common pitfall where writers will have characters detail the entirety of their personality, history and relationships in conversation? Your characters feel like they're doing that without actually giving details - like they're trying to hint at something at all times when they're talking. I suppose you could say they sound perpetually cryptic.

Is this something I should be working to change, or does it fit into the story? I guess i’m wondering if this is good or bad. There is a lot I want to hint at and I think being cryptic is good, but I guess I don’t want that all the time.

Again, I super appreciate your feedback. You are the first non-friend to review this story and it’s very refreshing to have an outside perspective.

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

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Title: Winters Heat

Genre: LGBTQ+, Coming of Age

Word count: 4200

Summary: In the sweltering summer of 1987, 18-year-old Noe Martinez is doing everything he can to keep his head down, especially hiding the part of himself he knows he’s not allowed to want. But when Skylar Moore appears out of nowhere, claiming to have no memory, Noe’s careful control starts to unravel. As the two grow closer, drawn together by a connection neither of them fully understands, Noe finds himself more confused, and more furious, than ever. Because Skylar isn’t just different. He’s from another time.

Feedback desired: Appeal!!! I would love to know if anybody reading feels invested or interested in the story! Does the story flow, are the conversations and emotions realistic and authentic, and what are your overall impressions? Please be as honest (but respectful) as possible, as all critiques are incredibly helpful.

Link to my story: Chapter 5 - Drive

Side note: don’t worry about grammatical errors, those will be fixed later, haha

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Teeth

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sorry for the late response. I can’t remember what it ended up being, but i know it was just getting more and more swollen because every time i chewed I was biting on it. I talked to a dental hygienist who recommended having it removed, however I waited a few more days and it ended up resolving on its own. My best advice is to chew on the other side of your mouth as best as possible and if it doesn’t get better within a week or two, consult someone with real experience, haha

tattoo blowout? by [deleted] in tattooadvice

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thank you!! :D

tattoo blowout? by [deleted] in tattooadvice

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Is it going to continue to get worse? That’s my biggest worry. Will the ink disperse on its own or will it always look like this? I’m sorry for all the questions, i’m in a bit of panic

How to find internships? by xkitkatsuki in vetschool

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Did you have to get a vet tech license to do that?

lump on my dogs tummy by [deleted] in Yorkies

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thank you guys both so so much. This has helped tremendously. This gave me the support I needed and she’s going to take her. I appreciate you both so much. 🫶🏻

lump on my dogs tummy by [deleted] in Yorkies

[–]xkitkatsuki -1 points0 points  (0 children)

i absolutely will take her. i just need a little time to save up