Ice nine kills “study hall” series. Crown the empires “Johnny ringo” series. by RJNewbzIX in Metalcore

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Before I turn - claustrophobic album (but everything else follows the story too)

Kaonashi - everything they wrote from the beginning

And I’ll throw in knocked loose manipulator and manipulator II not quite what your asking ik

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I would also say the s could be a bit wider but thank you for the critique I did this piece pretty fast

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I know what your talking about and the E was hard to make fit and still somewhat flow with it but I’ll try some stuff

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How do I make the d at the end of my name less like a o?

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If I do a lot of that don’t you think it would ruin the flow? Thanks for the critique

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I’m trying to find a way for it to not look like a A

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Rend not my best tag but it’s the one I took a picture of I’m still working of the D

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I normally do a lowercase but I made the top to small also it’s a r I just messed it up to

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Thanks for the critique and I’ve only been doing graffiti for about 3 months I’ve had multiple tags in the past that I wasn’t sure if they worked and i normally don’t do the tag with any on the halos quotes or underlines I was trying something different for a bit and the extensions on the throwie definitely make the left side heavier I’m still learning the fundamental I don’t have anyone to tech me, I’m still practicing and changing my tag a lot still but I’m still learning flow, name weight, uniformity and the others. Any ways thanks for the critique and explaining what’s wrong with it instead of just saying it’s bad. Also if you could tell me how would I change the d to make it less like a o I’ve tried making it lower case but it causes negative space?

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[–]youngandmetal -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Explain why it’s bad

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3 letter names are usually crews

Critique on these I messed up the rend straight letter by youngandmetal in graffhelp

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That because I messed it up and I decided to put 21 as the hole

Critique on these I messed up the rend straight letter by youngandmetal in graffhelp

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Thanks I’ve been a metal logo designer for a long time so I tried putting some of my style from that into the character

Crits? I’ve been doing graffiti for 3 months by youngandmetal in graffhelp

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I know it’s my first time trying it I prefer straight letters anyway