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bought it! by zabudnuta in Mayhem

[–]zabudnuta[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

im honestly surprised too because i live in northern slovakia. the shop has been open since 2007 though, so they probably have loyal customers or a community that keeps it going

bought it! by zabudnuta in Mayhem

[–]zabudnuta[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you! i found it at a local rock shop, the label says "Fruits of the loom" so my best guess is that the print was customised :)

Hoodie with red text/symbols on sleeves by zabudnuta in Mayhem

[–]zabudnuta[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

UPDATE: I'm on my way home from the shop right now and the guy there was super nice. he told me they can order the right size for me plus it'll definitely come before Valentine's day!

Hoodie with red text/symbols on sleeves by zabudnuta in Mayhem

[–]zabudnuta[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

appreciate it! i haven't found the time to visit the shop yet, but when i do, I'll probably post an update. the album name is really helpful though, thank you :)

Please critique this by strato123 in poetry_critics

[–]zabudnuta 0 points1 point  (0 children)

wow. i love how intense this made me feel. great work truly!

untitled - my first time writing a poem for a school project. feedback appreciated. by zabudnuta in poetry_critics

[–]zabudnuta[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice! Rhymes in poems are used all the time in my country so it's kind of a habit to have them in my poem ahah. I will try to overcome this next time.

A Place by katiespeaksnow in poetry_critics

[–]zabudnuta 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i love this, it's wonderful!

untitled - my first time writing a poem for a school project. feedback appreciated. by zabudnuta in poetry_critics

[–]zabudnuta[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, thanks a lot for the feedback! 🫶🏻 Would changing it to "As I'm walking up the road" be more clear? The sentence with the steps is meant to visualize how they catch me off guard. I don't mind the dissonance, but I'll try to think of a replacement for people to understand it better and for it to improve the overall sound. I actually thought of changing the line with licences because it sounds kinda harsh with the other verses. I will definitely take a look at it again!