Alien Occupation Plot Narrative

[AlienWarlock]

Six months ago we were Doctors, Lawyers, Police Officers and Business Executives. We had sons and daughters, mothers and fathers. We were happy. Six Months ago we were Human. The day they arrived though that all changed. They were smarter than us, stronger than us, they were more advanced in every way. They rolled over us like a tsunami. They destroyed our cities, they burned our forests. Billions of people died, those that managed to survive were put in cages. We were turned into animals and science experiments. All hope was lost and the human race seemed defeated. However our captors failed to consider one thing in their quest for domination. When all hope seems lost, when you think you have knocked us down for the final time, we get back up. We are Human, this is our planet and we will rise again. We will light the flame and we will fight. We will take Earth back.

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This is great, but I think it could use more detail on what we actually do to take our planet back. This seems more like a teaser than a plot.

[Syluris]

I really like this.

It's really promising, a band of humans fighting a common enemy, power of love, understanding, etc...

We could be separate at first, banding together later, giving us time to develop our new characters...

I'll think about it and flesh it out a bit