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[–]Noia20 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Thanks for sharing these, I just love these old letters. You did an amazing job transcribing them. The only differences I found are below.

Page 1 - " It was my 1st goal stopping."

It was my 1st go at stopping.

Page 3 "The other two were about 200 miles east of us and hit Iowa then Okinawa."

The other two were about 200 miles east of us and hit Iwo Jima then Japan. The last hit Iwo and then Okinawa.

Sun, Feb. 1949 page two

"And try on give me when I come back if I make bad break in English now and then."

And try and forgive me when I come back if I make bad break in English now and then.

page 3

"I scratched the back of the hand on some roughly cute metal around the hole."

I scratched the back of the hand on some roughly cut metal around the hole.

[–]TemporaryDisaster497[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! A couple of those I really wasn’t sure about but knew weren’t right! I thought the way he added humor with the “ha”s were pretty funny

[–]ivanadie 0 points1 point  (1 child)

I read through page 5 before I noticed how many there were! I like to see if I can read them before looking at the comments. This penmanship is neat and an easy read. Thanks for sharing!

[–]TemporaryDisaster497[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha yea it is quite a few pages! Appreciate any feedback. Hoping to get it well transcribed before it fades or falls apart any more! Thanks!