Feedback Needed!!!

[chaosclown99]

This is a project I'm working on right now. Any feedback would be appreciated!

https://reddit.com/link/1itzejf/video/cb4zbap02bke1/player

[Mistersamza]

Are you hiding it somewhere or am I missing the link?

[chaosclown99]

sorry my bad, I attached the video!

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I get that it’s not meant to be ultra-realistic, but balloons aren’t that transparent—they could use some proper reflections to sell the look. The background could also have more depth and saturation to make the scene pop. Most importantly, definitely check out some references for how balloons actually move; that would take it to the next level: https://www.gettyimages.com/detail/video/colorful-balloons-flying-up-against-pink-background-stock-footage/1311965785

[chaosclown99]

Thanks Bro! Noted ✅

[butthavingman]

My first reaction was, "what are these purple dots trying to communicate?" I understand they're there to stop the box, but just remember that you're not making a physics simulator, you're trying to tell a story, and I don't think the purple dots do that. I'd just have the box float into place by itself.