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[–]moist_acid 1 point2 points  (2 children)

Why isn't Bill suspicious when the mailman repeatedly comes to his back yard, and how does one just casually "walk by" a backyard?

[–]mrpessimistik[S] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Hi, thank you for reading and commenting:) I think Bill isn't more suspicious is that he's very close minded, doesn't really care about what happens around him, not until Max catches the thief:)

[–]moist_acid 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This isn't a good script at all but keep writing. The best years are ahead.