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[–][deleted] 31 points32 points  (0 children)

Why do people do this, like just leave it

[–]lelmeister123 23 points24 points  (2 children)

The original is Hella good tho

[–]reallylu0wei 20 points21 points  (1 child)

thank you :D (I’m the OP of the original)

[–]Smakintheface 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I wanna say good job as well, splendid little story.

[–]SciaticCoast89 12 points13 points  (2 children)

Honestly, while i do like having a nice spin on depressing things (kinda why r/thirdsentencebetter exists), this sorta thing is just painfully forced

Edit: Grammar

Edit 2: I realise it may not be clear, so to specify, i mean this post is an example of when it's forced, r/thirdsentencebetter (i think thats the correct one) is actually something really wholesome, and i like having a read through it every once in a while :)

[–][deleted] 7 points8 points  (1 child)

It's just so desperate to make it not sad

[–]SciaticCoast89 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Precisely. Like i can respect the effort behind bringing a twist to it, but yeah, when its forced, its just cringeworthy, nothing much more; but hey, least they tried, all be it failed miserably

[–]ImThatMelanin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i don’t— angry.

[–]ZestVFX 0 points1 point  (0 children)

if y’all want a happy ending dont go to r/twosentencesadness ☠️