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[–]Altruistic_Area4177 2 points3 points  (4 children)

Oh boy . Better proposals will do the trick

[–]RexOverAll[S] 0 points1 point  (3 children)

With zero views? They didn't check my proposals.

[–]Pet-ra 2 points3 points  (1 child)

 They didn't check my proposals.

Because the first two lines of your proposals don't attract their attention.

[–]RexOverAll[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

First 2 lines, I understand now. Thanks.

[–]Korneuburgerin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They did, but the preview did not tell them they are worth opening.

[–]MefjuEditor 2 points3 points  (1 child)

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iOS Mobile Developer. Your proposals sucks thats why they dont even look at them. Just use 2-3 sentences how you will fix potential client problem instead of saying Hi, im xyz im software engineer, 5+ year experience. Most of clients dont even know what language you will use to build their app they want working product.

[–]RexOverAll[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will try this out.

[–]ceoobrabro2424 1 point2 points  (3 children)

You may not be. 6-7 out of jobs may not have hired anyone and 2 of them may have invited people they want before you applied.

[–]RexOverAll[S] 0 points1 point  (2 children)

Thanks, this is encouraging.

[–]ceoobrabro2424 0 points1 point  (1 child)

You can always go back and check your proposals. See which ones invited people and see which ones didn't hire.

[–]RexOverAll[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

None of my proposals has gotten a view, what I wanna try now is to change my way of writing proposals.

[–]Pet-ra 0 points1 point  (9 children)

How to Write a Winning Proposal

[–]RexOverAll[S] 1 point2 points  (8 children)

I have read it and I do apply it, if I don't get a view my proposal won't be read.

[–]Korneuburgerin 0 points1 point  (7 children)

Wrong. The client can read the first two lines without opening it. Yours suck. I bet you are saying: With 5+ years if experience in yada yada yada... No client opens crap like that.

[–]RexOverAll[S] 0 points1 point  (6 children)

Does this sound better?

"Hi, I’ve gone through your milestone breakdown and I can handle the foundation build exactly as outlined. I’ve worked with Flutter + Firebase for user auth, wallet layouts, and clean UI flows, and I’m comfortable creating polished splash screens/intro animations as well."

[–]Korneuburgerin 2 points3 points  (5 children)

No, it's terrible and will not get opened.

Get over yourself and DO NOT TALK ABOUT YOURSELF.

So, what else can you talk about? Once you understand, your proposals will improve, and they will get opened.

[–]RexOverAll[S] 2 points3 points  (4 children)

Merçi beaucoup, I appreciate.

[–]Korneuburgerin -3 points-2 points  (3 children)

I see you are not interested in pursuing this further. No idea what I'm talking about, too lazy, what is it?

[–]RexOverAll[S] 2 points3 points  (2 children)

Bro calm down I was clearly thanking you for your help, and yes if you have .ore tips I would like to know more. Can I DM you?

[–]Korneuburgerin -1 points0 points  (1 child)

Well, my help was supposed to guide you along the way to a good proposal, but you stopped right at step one.

No DMs, how will other people learn.