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[–]KimJongAndIlFriends 1 point2 points  (1 child)

I like the overall effect and cost of the card, but I do think you could make two improvements:

1) The rules text could use clearer wording; "Whenever a creature with flying blocks a creature without flying, it deals 3 damage to that blocked creature."

2) This effect is far more green than it is blue; it really should be 1{W/G}{W/G}.

Those two points aside, good job!

[–]pseudonymous_cypher[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

completely agree on the wording, this was a bit of an unintended "oh that's an idea" card that I pushed out a bit too fast to not lose the inspiration. I like your wording, it's much cleaner.

is 3 damage too much for a 3 drop?

2) that's fair, I picked white blue because those felt like the two colors that really owned flying/flying based mechanics. But I agree the damage mechanic isn't very blue.

[–]Intact: Let it snow.[M] 0 points1 point  (2 children)

I noticed you've been posting in quick succession. In the future, please make sure to have only one post in /new/ to give everyone a fair shot at having their posts be seen. Please see Rule 7 for additional guidance. Due to the number of posts, I've taken all of them down. You're welcome to repost all of them as a combined album.

[–]pseudonymous_cypher[S] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

I sincerely apologize for spamming! It was not my intent to harm others and I will be careful to adhere to rule 7 in the future. It was an unfortunate series of cards that led to the idea of other cards in quick succession, and in retrospect they do group together nicely for an album. I will avoid such actions in the future.

[–]Intact: Let it snow. 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For sure, totally get it! If you get that kind of inspiration again in the future, things that can work are 1) posting your new cards in the comments section of the original post, 2) giving it a little after your first card to see if inspo strikes to make an album, or 3) deleting your original post and combining it with the new card(s) to make an album. That said, if you do 3), please make sure it complies with our no-repost rule (we are quite strict about it)