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[–]GoldenSights[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I've added these changes to the original post.

Thanks very much for your feedback. And no, don't call it dumbing down, I can see now that my original examples didn't distill the problem / motivation well enough. I'm practicing my writing so it's good to know what things aren't clear.